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Midnightmoon

Midnightmoon

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ghost

    I'm sorry I made it so confusing. I was trying to get across about this boy I like, How he used to say hi, acknowledge me, and now he doesn't....like ...

    May 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Deleted

    :)

    May 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Deleted

    I'll be posting a poem in a bit. Want me to tag you so you could review it?

    May 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Sleepy

    Love it!!

    May 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Teardrops

    Love it!!

    May 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: As Simple As That: Chapter One ; That's Not Cricket

    You didn't offend me! I'm sorry if I made it sound like it. If I sound rude, I'm sorry. I don't mean it. I'm just....dealing with...something right now. So just ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: As Simple As That: Chapter One ; That's Not Cricket

    I haven't been to your wall. I just saw this and had to read it. I like it! :). Anyway, I've posted several poems and the first few chapters of ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: As Simple As That: Chapter One ; That's Not Cricket

    I have one thing to say. You have a true talent for writing! Best story I have ever read. I'm hooked! :).

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Going Back

    Thank you!

    May 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Moon and Sun Prologue (IMPORTANT TO STORY)

    Oh, Kara! You made this sound so real! And if it is, ((Please forgive me if you don't like this, I'm only trying to help)) I understand! I really really ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The walls of the heart

    Thank you!

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: Dumb

    Haiku's are hard! I've written some before. I don't know much about Haiku's, so I really don't have anything to help. It's pretty good for a first try though! :)

    May 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Wasn't It Just a Dream? (Part 1)

    Amazing, amazing!! I really like it! I love how you make the reader feel the pain, the confusion, everything. I also like how you left it hanging. That is awesome! ...

    May 18, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Two Kittens

    Cute! I like the rhyming and there is absolutely nothing wrong with limericks! The last line is a little awkward, but sometimes it can add something to the poem! That's ...

    May 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Still prisoners? Chapter 3 of My messed up life.

    Thanks!

    May 12, 2017


I exist as I am, that is enough
— Walt Whitman