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Re: Ghost
I'm sorry I made it so confusing. I was trying to get across about this boy I like, How he used to say hi, acknowledge me, and now he doesn't....like ...
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
:)
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
I'll be posting a poem in a bit. Want me to tag you so you could review it?
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Sleepy
Love it!!
May 25, 2017 -
Re: Teardrops
Love it!!
May 25, 2017 -
Re: As Simple As That: Chapter One ; That's Not Cricket
You didn't offend me! I'm sorry if I made it sound like it. If I sound rude, I'm sorry. I don't mean it. I'm just....dealing with...something right now. So just ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: As Simple As That: Chapter One ; That's Not Cricket
I haven't been to your wall. I just saw this and had to read it. I like it! :). Anyway, I've posted several poems and the first few chapters of ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: As Simple As That: Chapter One ; That's Not Cricket
I have one thing to say. You have a true talent for writing! Best story I have ever read. I'm hooked! :).
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Going Back
Thank you!
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Moon and Sun Prologue (IMPORTANT TO STORY)
Oh, Kara! You made this sound so real! And if it is, ((Please forgive me if you don't like this, I'm only trying to help)) I understand! I really really ...
May 23, 2017 -
Re: The walls of the heart
Thank you!
May 23, 2017 -
Re: Dumb
Haiku's are hard! I've written some before. I don't know much about Haiku's, so I really don't have anything to help. It's pretty good for a first try though! :)
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Wasn't It Just a Dream? (Part 1)
Amazing, amazing!! I really like it! I love how you make the reader feel the pain, the confusion, everything. I also like how you left it hanging. That is awesome! ...
May 18, 2017 -
Re: Two Kittens
Cute! I like the rhyming and there is absolutely nothing wrong with limericks! The last line is a little awkward, but sometimes it can add something to the poem! That's ...
May 18, 2017 -
Re: Still prisoners? Chapter 3 of My messed up life.
Thanks!
May 12, 2017
