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Even if this isn't the first chapter, I wasn't bored reading this; I found it interesting. You see, I usually don't last reading chapters this long as I get bored ...

Part 2? I guess I can still catch up. :D While not being a big fan of science fiction, I enjoyed reading this and hoped to keep up. Whatever ever ...

This poem is one of those types that I like reading. It has a smooth flow (from my perspective), it rhymed (These aren't necessary; I just like them.), and, most ...

I know this is old, but I couldn't help myself. Anyhow, I love the message written here. It's very clear I must say . I'm surprised that no one came ...

Sounds nice. :) Though I didn't get most of the wording. You see, the only punctuations I've seen is a question mark and a comma. I even mistook it for ...

Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ...

Nice. I've always found action, adventure with cultural themes interesting. Are you gonna make a new chapter/volume for this one? Anyhow, I'm no expert in writing and most of my ...

I'm no expert at poems, but here are the things I want to correct. "Mr" needs a period (.) at the end, or you can write it as "Mister". "I", ...

The message is relatable; it shows the reality about death. I have the feeling to correct a few things though. First, the title should have the first and its important ...

I like how it is written. I usually won't last long reading stories with this length. It also hapoened that while the character's struggles are there, I couldn't really see ...

I'm not that much into Sci-Fi but I decided to give your story a try. :D First things first, I actually liked how this turned out. It wasn't boring to ...

I found it as a good read; I usually skim, but I read this one word for word. So I'd be interested in a new chapter. Though I did notice ...