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Dark And Deadly

by ali


Wendy's Store is getting unpleasant notes.Follow Rachel and see this is no joke!

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Thu May 12, 2016 8:17 am
MicrohieraxFT wrote a review...



Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw I noticed is this, which is probably a typo.

Wendy's Store is getting unpleasant notes.Follow Rachel and see this is no joke!


It should have a space between the period (.) and Rachel. Other than that it sounds like something I really want to read, you know, mystery and stuff. I also saw that it's fanfiction. Can you tell me what you're writing for and about?




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Sun Apr 10, 2016 12:06 pm
Elijah says...



I do not know why but this sounds so appealing to me! XD
Anyways,If you had already reached the point in which you want to share this story with us ( me XD) just do so!
I feel the horror/mystery in this who knows why!They are my most read genres that I prefer so If it is themed in that area I would read it !





Life is about losing everything.
— Isabel Allende