Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw I noticed is this, which is probably a typo.
Wendy's Store is getting unpleasant notes.Follow Rachel and see this is no joke!
It should have a space between the period (.) and Rachel. Other than that it sounds like something I really want to read, you know, mystery and stuff. I also saw that it's fanfiction. Can you tell me what you're writing for and about?
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