MiaParamore

Can you rate it? I mean people of which age can read it? I am from India so would love to read anything on India.

Thanks.

Thanks Skins and curiousvampire.I will fix all the errors. Thanks again to both of you for reviewing my work!

Hey I just noticed that you edited what I pin-pointed. Thank you. You changed undead to immortal which is good but the spelling is wrong. You wrote imortal while its ...

Can't stop laughing. I pressed "LIKE". You have got some talent gal.

Thanks for saying yes to my silly question.

You are funny Biffle1. You are amazing!

Thanks all of you who reviewed my work. I am editing it now.

Thanks Biflle1 and Skins. Thanks a lot.

Thanks a lot RayquazaKid or RK. :D

Thanks a lot. No it's not going to be entirely a 3rd pesron narration. But somewhere I am going to introduce it. Thanks for the review.

Can you put up the rating?

Can you provide a rating? Thanks.

Hi I truly agree with your poin. They won't let him free without a proper alibi. Do read more!

If your stuff is that much sweet and cute then do PM me. I had a great time reading it.