MiaParamore

I bent down over a sink in a bathroom I’ve never been into. How did I end ed (you never use past form with did') up here? The last thing ...

Hi Casey. i wanted to read this story yesterday but I didn't have time. Anyways, here I am. Hope I help you. Here are the nit-picks: I’m terrified , I’ll ...

Hi. I found this part very boring at first honestly but at the end it became interesting. there are many mistakes and I can tell you only some because I ...

Hi there. I am here to review your story. The wind blew my hair in on (it can't come in your face lolz) my face as I climbed the rocky ...

Hi xxclaraxx(weird but cool username), So first of all welcome to YWS. Hope your this post turns out to be good. I will be copying your story and then edit ...

Hey Biffle1. I think you have got a talent for writing. Your others post have been rated mostly 16+ and 18+ so I couldn't go through it. I like the ...

Hi i am here again to review your story. It was indeed a nice read and I am really excited to read more and see what happens next. -> When ...

Hi. I think this wasn't fabulous or bad, just something in between. I don't think it is something like a lyrics because it didn't set up with any tune I ...

Hi Kanen. I have been through your other posts before and I must admit that you are a good writer. I liked the story very much and I hope you ...

Hi ColdZero. i am your reviewer for today. If you ask me whether you should continue the story then I would say you should. I couldn't find any big mistake ...

Hi Whitaker. I will be your reviewer today. Hope I could be of some help. It was during the day in which I wish I were able to sleep. The ...

Hi I am here as requested. I liked the story and specially the characters. I hope you go ahead with it. Here are some nit-picks: As soon as I am ...

Amazing lyrics. It is for the first time I came to the Lyrics section and I don't regret it. You have written an awesome song.Definitely it would suit Owl City. ...

Hi RayquazaKid, I am here as requested. Honestly speaking, I didn't have any idea what Myst is :?: . But you explained it very well and I know quite a ...

Hi. I am here as requested. I am in total awe. It was a wonderfully carved story. I am astonished that why it wasn't featured? I like your writing style. ...