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Hey, Looney! Welcome to YWS. I hope the site is treating you well. So, coming to your story I would like to say I really liked it. Lets between father ...

Hey, Sakura! ^_^ Thanks for letting me know that you had edited this. Also, I'd like to appreciate you editing this piece after taking our advice and analyzing it yourself. ...

Hey, Sakura! I really love your username. :) I'd like to start off with the title. It's cute, doesn't declare much but keeps me hooked on. The main reason I ...

Hey Freedom! Welcome to YWS. Hannah's right. Just go and make a post on Welcome Mat. There would be some awesome people you could chat up to there. Also, I'm ...

Hey, Life! I'm back. Though a bit late. Her hair was frizzy and auburn and I could see the worry in her brown eyes. This sentence sounds a bit immature. ...

Antonio! :wink: First of all, welcome to YWS. I always love reviewing something for the newbies-it increases my knowledge of the wonderful talent we have with us, and having new ...

Hey there! So, I read through this and even though it wasn't the most exciting work I can see it was interesting. I'm dying to know what exactly had happened ...

Hey Butterfly! ^_^ I'm here to review. Hope I'm helpful. I haven't really read much of FanFics before, so thanks for my first read. That being said, I'm not entirely ...

Hey Gaiya! You've got a pretty name. So, I won't lie. The reason I clicked your piece was because of your title. I was really interested to know more about ...

Hey Gaiya! :) You've got a pretty name. So, I won't lie. The reason I clicked your piece was because of your title. I was really interested to know more ...

Hey, Ben. Before I start reviewing, I'd like to repeat what Squall mentioned. You need to chop your text into neat paragraphs, consider punctuating your sentences, and edit this out. ...

Abbi, darlin'! Thanks for posting the link to your work-that was helpful. So, here I am. I didn't have any idea that you had posted your novel on YWS, too! ...

Hey Persy! This is maybe my first time leaving a comment on your poem, but let me tell you, I stalk your poems a lot. xD! Honestly, your poems are ...

Ariel!

Hey prolixity! Thanks for the review request. Your request actually got me reviewing again, so thanks a ton! ^_^ I'd be short since it's a short short story. xD! Besides, ...