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Well, this is a touching poem. I really liked the emotion you conveyed through it. However, there is some little mistakes such as: Who are you? She asks Perfectly seriously ...

Well, this is a fairly... rigid poem. Which is not a bad thing, because that's kind of the whole point of the poem (I think) to make everyday seem the ...

Hey love2read, First off all, well done for making it rhyme. And not only did you make it rhyme, it made sense. Although I think some of the lines seemed ...

Okay, I really liked this poem. You described the emotions perfectly. Although I would suggest that you clean up the structuring a bit. It's easier to read small stanzas than ...

Okay, I really liked the story behind this poem. It's... deep and bold. It's about the darker stuff. And you captured the feeling quite brilliantly. But I did notice a ...

It's quite good considering that it actually rhymed (I could never write a rhyming poem, they seem to hate me). I quite like the message that it brought out to ...

Hi! I loved the first stanza, it had a really nice flow and I loved how you included, "Shakespearean tragedy" there too. It reinforced how truly sad the occasion is. ...

I feel as though some of the lines are a bit disconnected. Especially this part as my brain takes a pause at the end of every line. But don't forget ...

Okay, I just noticed that there were some grammatical errors along the way, such as this: “ F or me to know and you to find out. But lat name’s ...

I liked how you use the metaphor in this poems and there's great imagery in there as well. So well done for that. :) Just some little nitpicks: Freedom is ...

You can try to break me, Point out all my flaws , And try to tell me , That I'm not strong enough to fight. You can try to break ...

I can't find anything wrong with this poem. Except for maybe you can specify the angel's gender. But it's still a pretty good poem if you keep it as 'it'. ...

FIrst of all, well done for actually writing a poem that rhymes! I could never do that. But yes, I agree with all the others, rhyming shouldn't be the main ...

I think that this poem is somewhat short, maybe you could expand on it, add another stanza or two. Maybe explaining why the person doesn't walk out of the door. ...

I stare at the white walls , the silent tears drip from my face I look into the small mirror , my face pale for not having seen the sun ...