MiRaCLeS

I was looking for a friend and not just anyone would do, When my eyes stopped searching I was looking at you. Capital 'I' over here We would look at ...

My (failed) haiku response to your (awesome) haiku: The thing you wrote was, So short, yet so powerful. I really love it That basically sums it up. Sorry for calling ...

Hello, First of all, like ehte92 might've mentioned, you need some puctuations. It makes the poem looks much more structured, neat and proffesional, not just words scribbled randomly down on ...

I don't get what you're trying to get across exactly. The poem wasn't exactly a story, it wasn't a rant or anything. So basically what I'm saying is, what are ...

Okay, I agree with Twit here: You've only skimmed the top of the story. I think that the story should have more depth and character. Since at the moment, the ...

I'm going to put a *like* for this poem now. I liked the words you used to construct the lines. It all fits perfectly and paints a vivid picture about ...

Currently the poem haven't got much substance to it. Just a bunch of words, however this is easily fixed if you put some sort of meaning behind the poem. Make ...

Hi HeyRedRidingHood! I crave only melt on the tongue This could be only me, but I don't really get this line here. Perhaps what you're trying to say is, "I ...

I like this poem, it's short and sweet and gets right to the point. I can see your hurt and emotion. Also, I like how you set it out as ...

The poem you have there is simple and short and shows all your emotions plainly. Although I agree with the last reviewer about this part. I don’t want to hide ...

I like this poem. It's simple and sweet. With some rhyming happening as well. However,there are some lines which are a bit cliched and overused to me. Also, I think ...

Hi inimitablebeauty! i see the excitment and the grief in your eye Agreed with the other reviewer that excitement and grief doesn't match up. I understand what you're trying to ...

I think that in the poem, you captured a part of the war. Not the whole thing, because that would be quite impossible to describe a whole war with it's ...

Hi Doxie00! So, you have a nice poem here. I liked the metaphor you used with the waves and love. Although, I think it's a bit repetitive going on about ...

Alright, I'm not too sure I understand the last three lines: Do not stand at my grave and cry I am not there I did not die. I think you ...