Messenger

ah see, that makes a lot of sense. Really it wasn't a long read, but for the sake of getting at least 2 reviews on both parts, I would just ...

So I haven't read this story at all but the title has serious Mark Lawrence vibes and I totally dig it!

Oh yis. Arthuroan is the town/fields and I'm gonnanhave to really go through and make sure it stays spelled consistently no thanks to Word. The ship is lower because it's ...

I guess I'm now realizing that I never made it clear enough that there are supposed to be several years between part 1 and 2 >.> but I will keep ...

Hey, between taking forever to review and me taking forever to write who knows who's worse%uD83D%uDE02%uD83D%uDE02 but thanks! Looks like you it into the spotlight

I will make sure to keep a note for revisions when it comes to their age %uD83D%uDC4D%uD83C%uDFFB and it was originally supposed to be 4 parts %uD83D%uDE02

You may have missed the 14 years dialog near the beginning of the conversation? I don't have an exact age for them tbh somewhere between 16-18ish which hopefully you get ...

:) I see you still grinding! :D

At least it sounds like I hit the vibe I was going for with these projects yes?

Yeah I'm writing it in actual parts like even in my word doc. Been that person who goes to review a short story on here only to see it scrolls ...

Thx for the reviews! I will go back and work some more. If you really are interested I could look into maybe working a fight scene on the end of ...

Hey, I also just edited this as well. I re-worded the opening, gave a small descriptor of the papay, changed wing to "under his large embrace", the line about the ...

Hey I went back and edited the things you pointed out a few weeks ago. If you could just read those sentences and lemme know what you think that would ...

i never wanna talk about the POV problems in this chapter again xD it was so bad.

so when you inhale snow that is light and fluffy (which it is when it's so cold that it won't be melting into water) it acts a little bit like ...