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Here to review for my 35th review as a Knight of the Green Room. @Hannah So this chapter doesn't seem too bad, but it could use a lot more description. ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. I will post problems I see, or things I really like in order as I read them. So ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. Wow! This poem has so much descriptive, imaginative, metaphoric writing. It was beautiful. I loved the whole thing. ...

Reviewing for the Knights of the Green Room be Knight Malachi. He looked really shinny to Xaba. Xaba has never seen a Very-bright-body-soul before, he only heard of them from ...

Knight Malachi to review. This is definitely poetic. Like Dreamy said it could probably go to music as well. Lots of songs are made from poetry. So since it is ...

Knight Malachi to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So I saw that every time you have I, it is not capitalized. i left you lying on the ...

Knight Malachi here to review for the Knight of the Green Room. So this chapter wasn't at all what I was expecting . . . let's just skip to the ...

Here to review is none other then the one and only Knight Malachi. So this is one of the 2 haiku's I'v read on here. The other one was very ...

Knight Malachi here to Review for the Knights of the Green Room. Alright, so this divided is SO much better. It allows the reader to not fee like reading your ...

Here as a Green Room knight. A Special World. I loved that poem. your metaphor of the cocoon was really cool, and done very well. I liked the whole poem, ...

I forgot to mention that it seems like every time the chapter ends, Ren is about to be shot. Also, I don't remember if you had much about this in ...

OK, so this is an idea I was working with . . . anyway great idea, and I hope you continue it. It seems pretty interesting, and I hope to ...

Here to review is Knight Malachi, for the KotGR. Wow, that was . . . beautiful. That was a sad poem, but it still had the hop that we will ...

Knight of the Green Room Malachi here to review. Love this poem. It has such a good moral, and it is so true. This is a very encouraging poem. Being ...

I thought for a second. “Touché.” I said, and continued walking. Hahahahahahaha. Love that line. By the way, this is a review for the Knights of the Green Room. So ...