Messenger

The Messenger here to do my first review. So! OK I immediately realized that this was written much unlike the other chapters. And I mean that in a very good ...

This was amazing, it really was. I loved the bond that grew between the two characters It was quite humorous as well. There were a few typos (apologies for not ...

The Messenger Knight, here to review for KotGR. She felt as something wet hit her brow, warm and sticky. Delete the bold, unnecessary word. Gentleman like in a manner. Add ...

The Messenger Knight here to review Oh wow! That was powerful. This is a beautiful piece, and it is sadly all true. I think this piece is a great tribute ...

Hi, The Messenger Knight here to review for you as usual. So, I went into this heart-pumping, but I felt like this chapter contained too much to be so short, ...

The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR So happy to see you back on here and posting! I love the length of your chapters. It helps the reader to ...

the Messenger Knight here to review. OK,m so you really did fool me with this. Even when I saw how short it is but hadn't read it, I was thinking ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you, as promised. So if I see anything I think could be fixed I will list it below. First off: "Why does it ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you. Happy Review Day!!! so, I am not sure why this is all in italic. It might have been formatting problems, which I ...

The Messenger here to review for you Snoink! Happy Review Day!!! Hehehehehe. That was funny. Sounds like stories I've heard, and siblings I have with such problems. Very funny haiku ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for Happy Review Day! I fly above a concrete jungle, A bird's-eye view of a cement paradise. I think you don't have to put ...

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The Messenger Knight here to review Happy Review Day! "You should be sleeping Isabel, You need a comma after sleeping, I think. "Why me?! Surely, Gen should be the one ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for you, and KotGR. Happy Review Day! you shall be expecting it to come every day. The bold word needs to be added. I ...

The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Happy Review Day! Merin sat with her legs crossed on her hard cot in the dark room one of the sisters had ...