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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Our Perfect Worlds - Part 5

    Okay. Mara's POV and a very interesting title. Sort of a play on words as well since she has a doppelganger who lived here before and she's essentially replaced her. ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Our Perfect Worlds - Part 4

    Okay. Chapter 4, here we go. Let's see what the craziest up to in Barraza town ToT Daoloth. Mara explains him as some sort of shapeless god. So complex that ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Our Perfect Worlds - Part 3

    Im back! I figured I'll get all 6 reviews in. Gotta at least keep pace with @tikaya so we have a shot at winning ToT OH!! I meant to mention ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Our Perfect Worlds - Part 2

    Hey! Hoping to get all five chapters done today for review day, but at the very least we'll get the first two done right now! Let's get back in. . ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Our Perfect Worlds - Part 1

    Hello, whats this, a new sci fi novel? Sitting all lonely in the green room on Valentines Day? Here on behalf on the Red Roses am I to remedy that. ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Five;

    *breathing intesifies* back to back to back reviews let's go. Through the purple.sparkles we go... but working with her for so long had allowed him to see though the cracks. ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Four; Rewrite history

    Reviewing Roses at your service. Let's get to the Agency, shall we? Verena peeled off her wet blouse, leaving her in a t-shirt and bulletproof vest. She dumped the wet ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Three; Deafening silence

    Hi lady. Happy Valentines Day! What th-” James didn’t finish his sentence as his earpiece emitted a screech of radio fuzz. Well, there went his hearing. Okay. This is a ...

    Feb 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Agents Of Time: Chapter Two; Champagne Problems.

    I am baaaack The main thing that comes to me is that Verena should he better prepared. I mentioned this in my previous review, but why isnt she just planning ...

    Jan 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Agents of Time: Chapter One; The Mansion

    Looks like @Snoink went absolutely ham, but I tried to have my thoughts in order before I read it so that if any of our opinions align you know they ...

    Jan 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 18

    Hi rat! I've been meaning to get to this for a minute if trying to dispel the nerves coiled in his chest. Marin sat beside him, her leather jacket brushing ...

    Nov 19, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 17

    Hey more Eternal Beauty! Mary Shelley Spring had settled over Nagano like a soft, golden veil, but its reign was waning. Late May’s heat crept into the air, bringing the ...

    Oct 9, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: When a witch loves

    Hi creepy. I suppose it is officially spooky booky season isnt it? Let's get into the festivities. Im a little confused by the meter and rhyming scheme of the poem. ...

    Oct 2, 2025
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: The Soldiers : The Old Guard (2/3)

    Hey! Back here again as promised! If part 3 is somewhere else please let me know, or feel free to tag me when you post the last part! And Avery ...

    Oct 1, 2025
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: The Soldiers : Napoleon of the West (1/3)

    Hey there! Stopping in for a little review on an interesting title. At first I was going to disagree with the notion that most people are rumming around being wild ...

    Sep 30, 2025


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