Messenger

Hi retro, Messenger is back to read another one of your poems. Happy Review Day too!!! When are you going to get published! you got de skillz XDD But in ...

Hi! Happy Review Day from the Red Team! Messenger here to review four you. Well the reviews below pointed out all the nitpicks it looks like. So I won't talk ...

Hi . . . . *glares at Blue* I'm back. And my emotions are flip-flopping, so I'm just going to go ahead and read this to get my hopes crushed ...

Messenger is back with just afew chapters to go!!!!! Wha . . wait . . . what!?!?!?! You . . but . . . BLUE!!!!!!! WHAT> DID> YOU> JUST> DO! ...

I'm back and . . .wow. I mean I'm suddenly looking at this story from a whole new angle. This is lovely. I just . . . . gaah must ...

Messenger is baaaack! you have no idea how excited I am getting!We finally get to hear Goblin's side of the story, and maybe get a not-so-horribly-evil-villain thingy! Maybe they can ...

Iz me again. I did not copy Deanie :p Anyway I am back and ready to see how this story is going to end! Wait, it has to end?!?! NOOO!! ...

This better be worth the build-up! I'm kidding, I'm sure it will be. So, shall we get to the story? A nitpick again! All I’ve got left is a knife, ...

Oh goooooooody! WAR AT LAST! Oh hi, *waves* I'm here to attempt a helpful review for you :P Conrad had point-blank refused to stay behind, saying that he had been ...

So I'm back, and ready to read!! Oh and criticize you to death hehehehe to be the king you’ve always wanted to be. Attack with rage, destroy Goblin! Pick up ...

Hi Blue, I finally made it back. And I can't wait to get a going again! quote]Mr. Catcher, as it happened, was the older brother of Ronin and Finn, a ...

Oh my word, can you believe it! I am only 20 chapters away from being done!!!! Like so close! What will happen!?!?!?!?! According to the calculator I am 78. something ...

Hi, I am back again. I had some previous reviewing obligations that I really needed to get to. (Not that you are less important ya know, but you aren't going ...

Messenger here. So seeing this in the spotlight and everything got me interested to find out what this was about. I only have one nitpick. This stanza: A week had ...

I think that this chapter was a little too fast. I an see what you are trying to do, but I feel like you are giving away a lot of ...