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hey! This shouldn't have to sit in the green room for this long! That's a shame! So lemme help you out :) What truly why add the truly? is there ...

hey! this does not deserve to be in the cold green room of Unreadness for so long! Luckily I have come to rescue it! reasonably young But reason can differ ...

Hey! I'm here XD Right off the bat I love this poem. It just feels... RIGHT. Makes me remember that poetry can actually be done well by people (me so ...

Hey there! review as requested! Lemme go through the nitpicks first and then I'll get to the actual story. I'm struggling to envision these birds. you talk of wings, but ...

hey, so I just read the first tid-bit with the king reading the letter. Nice descriptions. Gives me a very medievalish feel. also, Skyrim? Or are you just using some ...

heey it's Messy here cot a review in who knows how long. I'm not going to deal with grammar here, I'm just going to focus on the story, so here ...

Hey blue, it's messy here to review for you real quick! Let's start with the positive first! I found this story somewhat amusing. As a child's story I'm sure that ...

Hey night, I'm finally heeeeere to review as I promised. So let's get started!! :) Well, I really liked this. The color of red being a focus was quite blatantly ...

Hey, Messy here you his 550th review on YWS! (Which I also get a blue star) So, this wasn't a badly written chapter. You did have a few typos, but ...

Hey, Messy here to give you a review! Shall we begin? Whoa. First off, I liked your ending. Nice and creepy and magicallish. (which should totally be a word) Anyways, ...

Hey, I'm messy! Shall I give you a review? Well first off, before I get to the meat of this poem, I have to say that I'm kind of indecisive ...

heeey I am here as a Knight of the Afterwatch. It's nice to be able to jump into the story and actually know what's going on lol. Sooo . . ...

Heeey Noelle. I have returned. If my reviews are terrible sorry, I'm a bit frazzled after the power went out last night till four a.m. So, I shall attempt to ...

hey BlockedWriter! Interesting username I must say. Sooo, lemme start out with some good stuff. I really liked your font and format to this poem. Generally I don't like short ...

No word count *pouts* Anywho, yeah I'm back. Have a little bit of time to get this chapter done, and then I'll get the rest later today. :) Let's get ...