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Re: Seen: 12:39 AM
Hey Kazumi, I'm here to you a lil review on this piece. This isn't a very long piece, so I've only got a few things to say, but let's get ...
Oct 31, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (7.1)
Trying to sneak in 2 reviews since I have some extra time, so sorry if it's a little short. Trying to get back on track where I can give you ...
Oct 31, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (6.2)
Hey Scribs (gonna have to work on the name change) I'm here for one review today:D Got a couple thoughts on the chapter, and then some overall thoughts on your ...
Oct 31, 2018 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter two; The Dark Scale
Hey, I'm here for another review today because I am on a rolllll baby! xD On observation, it seems I wounded the creature, it's slick blood still glazed the blade ...
Oct 29, 2018 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter one; awakening.
Hey, welcome to YWS! If you need anything, feel free to shoot me a PM. A couple notes that you may or may not find useful, but that's kind of ...
Oct 29, 2018 -
Re: Perfect Crime. (4)
Hey Eros, all caught up finally! Let's go over some things 1. I would highly recommend looking up the legal procedures for how arresting someone works, and what all the ...
Oct 29, 2018 -
Re: Perfect Crime. (3)
Hey Eros, Messy here with a review. This one might be a bit shorter than usual. A lot of what I would say I've already said, so I'll just sum ...
Oct 29, 2018 -
Re: Perfect Crime. (2)
Hey, here with another (hopefully) helpful review. I have a lot of thoughts on your opening paragraph so Adam's blue eyes showed clear anxiety. He tried to on his mobile ...
Oct 26, 2018 -
Re: Perfect Crime. (1)
Hey Eros, this sounded intriguing so I added it to my reading list. Here we go! He was moving back and forth slowly on the old flexible chair, causing a ...
Oct 24, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (6.1)
Hey, here for another review. totally catching up hehe Carter could do little to help Gideon and Isha, who were moving silently and efficiently to set up a camp, besides ...
Oct 22, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (5.2)
Hey, back for at least one section today. They stopped short halfway down the path, when they all took in the sight of the police officers standing in front of ...
Oct 19, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (5.1)
Hey, here for another quick stop-in Probably won't get to 5.2. for a while, but I figured I should get a headstart on it. ('i'll catch up some day) I've ...
Oct 17, 2018 -
Re: Hunted 3.2
Hey Noelle, here for another review. Alekos turned, his chair scraping against the wood floor. “I don’t want to. He’s going to tell me the same thing as always. ‘Get ...
Oct 17, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (4.2)
Heere for part 2 today :D “Winnie,” Carter said again, hurrying to compose himself. He wiped sweat-soaked hands off on his pants before wringing them together. “Um, I- what are ...
Oct 12, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (4.1)
Hey, I'm back. As if. Carter ducked his head, wondering why Gideon didn’t just admit that he thought Carter wouldn’t be capable of doing such a simple task. Why he ...
Oct 12, 2018
