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Hey, MEssy here again WHoooooooa. Hooold up, park the bus, pause the movie!!! This is so fast. Okay, let's work through it a little slower. 1) The fight scene at ...

Hey, Messy back for more OKAY! This is a better chapter. At least, I think so. There's some decent dialogue, an intriguing end, and some more cool tech stuff which ...

Hey, Messy here with another review for ya 1. I have a couple of positives from this chapter I thought I should point out. "For a second there I thought ...

Hey, Messy here again before I pop off to bed Dreamy already pointed out some of the grammatical errors that I was going to, and since I was pretty thorough ...

Hey, Messy here I noticed that you have a couple of works in the green room going pretty far back, and that doesn't seem right to me! So let's review ...

Hey, Messy here There isn't a lot of material that you've written here, and so I won't try to drag this review on, but I did have a couple of ...

Hey, Messenger here to review this since it looks like it's been in the green room a long time. Typically what I do is just read through the chapter and ...

Hey, I didn't see you posted a new chapter!! I'm so happy. Let's get right in I step slowly and cautiously, yet confidently into the darkness of the hall, into ...

Hey, I'm so bad at reviewing these days, but here I am anyway. Let's get started And Gideon was still on watch. He could hear him pacing back and forth ...

Hey, squeaking in another review here for ya! During the time it took to finish tending to Gideon, set up camp, and eat their separate portions of a thrown together ...

Hey, I'm here on time as promised so let's just jump right in before school drags me away again! Isha walked over to him and Gideon watched her, apprehensively. Leaves ...

Hey, here's one more review. If you ever get back and keep writing, please tag me :) The walls are a classic plaster color, one of which one would expect ...

Hwy, I never realized that you came out with more chapters! I know that you're on hiatus right now, but hopefully, if you come back then this review will be ...

Hey Scribs, here for another review, so so so much later than intended. It's been a busy week. So, again, no quotes, just some thoughts. 1. Whisper's character is interesting. ...

Hey, here for one last review to get all caught up concord. Let's get right into it. 1) Your pronouns have got me very confused. You have a lot of ...