Young Writers Society

Hey, Messy here! Right off that bat, I like this story. It's the complete opposite tone of the last P4P story I read which had a comedic tone, so switching ...

Hey, Messy here! Let's hop into this review. Overall I like this story. I like the almost whimsical mysticism, very much like ACC has throughout its pages. There's a feeling ...

And I'm to the last one you have posted! Messy is back Wait, is this the end? I'm not actually opposed to that if it's the case. I like the ...

Hey, MEssy here again WHoooooooa. Hooold up, park the bus, pause the movie!!! This is so fast. Okay, let's work through it a little slower. 1) The fight scene at ...

Hey, Messy back for more OKAY! This is a better chapter. At least, I think so. There's some decent dialogue, an intriguing end, and some more cool tech stuff which ...

Hey, Messy here with another review for ya 1. I have a couple of positives from this chapter I thought I should point out. "For a second there I thought ...

Hey, Messy here again before I pop off to bed Dreamy already pointed out some of the grammatical errors that I was going to, and since I was pretty thorough ...

Hey, Messy here I noticed that you have a couple of works in the green room going pretty far back, and that doesn't seem right to me! So let's review ...

Hey, Messy here There isn't a lot of material that you've written here, and so I won't try to drag this review on, but I did have a couple of ...

Hey, Messenger here to review this since it looks like it's been in the green room a long time. Typically what I do is just read through the chapter and ...

Hey, I didn't see you posted a new chapter!! I'm so happy. Let's get right in I step slowly and cautiously, yet confidently into the darkness of the hall, into ...

Hey, I'm so bad at reviewing these days, but here I am anyway. Let's get started And Gideon was still on watch. He could hear him pacing back and forth ...

Hey, squeaking in another review here for ya! During the time it took to finish tending to Gideon, set up camp, and eat their separate portions of a thrown together ...

Hey, I'm here on time as promised so let's just jump right in before school drags me away again! Isha walked over to him and Gideon watched her, apprehensively. Leaves ...

Hey, here's one more review. If you ever get back and keep writing, please tag me :) The walls are a classic plaster color, one of which one would expect ...