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  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens
    Re: The Potentiality of Infinite Chickens

    I was about to be done for the evening, but then I saw the title of this poem, and I thought "There's no way I don't at least do myself ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: A Humble Quest

    Hey, I liked your first poem so I thought I would stop by for more :) So, I really like this poem as well. There's this whole untold story that ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature
    Re: A Celestial Dream

    Hey there! I came to poetry with fantasy, not totally sure of what I would find, but this is the second poem I'm reviewing, and I am absolutely loving the ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: Crystal Cavern

    Hey there! here to wind down Review Day and try to bring my team a win while also reading some great poetry! So, here are a few notes for you: ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Runaway- Chapter 2

    Back one more time today and I can say before I even read it that removing the bold lettering already looks better and is easier on the eyes to read. ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Runaway- Chapter 1.

    Back for more as promised. 1. While it was difficult to read the large chunk in the prologue, this is sooo much more. A few tips for breaking your work ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Runaway-Prologue

    Hey there :) welcome to YWS and Happy Review Day! Let's hop in 1. I would personally put a trigger warning for this, especially with hos the last sentence goes, ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Young Once Again

    Hey there and Happy Review Day as we wind down the stretch! Let's get to it 1. I love the overall feeling of raising poem. I always think that poem ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: 31 Hellish Halloween Tales (Part Three) (Tales 22-31)

    Hey there! I won't be reviewing all of these in one review, but I want you to get some outside opinions, so let me know once this is out of ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: Jikken-yō nezumi

    Hey there! Happy Review Day from the pumpkin teeeam. Let's hop right in. I'm not going in any specific order but just jotting down some thoughts. 1. I always love ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: Breaking

    It seems everyone is getting in on the spooky fun eh? Let's go through this and I'll make a few points for you to consider! 1. Overall, good vibes. I ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Sinister Magick- Chapter 4: Sinister Reading

    Alright. Let's do this ooone laaast tiiime 1. Valid thoughts by Minerva in the beginning. You haven't stated it but it seems that her upbringing was not only rough, but ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Sinister Magick- Chapter 3: Perfume & Alcohol

    I'm still a'comin! Let's get right to it. 1. My overall thought is that this feels like half a chapter, or that the last chapter and this one should be ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Sinister Magick- Chapter 2: A Deal with a Goddess

    Back for Round Two! Just a quick note again about tense, and I won't being it up again. We've got past where it should be and present where it should ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Sinister Magick - Chapter 1: Reality

    Happy Review Day fellow Pumkin! It seems that Minerva would get straight to the point, so I will as well. Let's check out a few things. 1. Tense - not ...

    Oct 28, 2023


"What is a poet? An unhappy person who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music."
— Søren Kierkegaard, Philosopher & Theologian