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  • Poetry » Humor, Chickens
    Re: War And Geese

    Hey there. The title caught my eye. The poem did not disappoint. So, a little bit of context: I may or may not have an entire, serious, and just as ...

    Apr 30, 2024

  • Short Story » Literature, Spiritual
    Re: A love like God's

    Hi there. Welcome to YWS! Let's take a look at what you've got here :) And yes, the weed was laced with meth, and when we found out my mother ...

    Apr 30, 2024

  • Short Story » Horror, Other
    Re: tomorrow, yesterday, and today

    Hey there and welcome to YWS :) It has been here as long as I have. At first we did notice its presence. I believe you meant to say that ...

    Apr 30, 2024

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature
    Re: Shine Like A Supernova!

    Hi there, here for a little review :) I love the imagery of this poem. The cosmos is such a fun environment to frame any story in, and can be ...

    Apr 30, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative
    Re: The Exchange student, Chapter 3

    Hi there! You asked me a while back for a review and I'm here at least. I really do apologize about the delay, but I think there's a lot to ...

    Apr 9, 2024

  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens
    Re: The Potentiality of Infinite Chickens

    I was about to be done for the evening, but then I saw the title of this poem, and I thought "There's no way I don't at least do myself ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: A Humble Quest

    Hey, I liked your first poem so I thought I would stop by for more :) So, I really like this poem as well. There's this whole untold story that ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature
    Re: A Celestial Dream

    Hey there! I came to poetry with fantasy, not totally sure of what I would find, but this is the second poem I'm reviewing, and I am absolutely loving the ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: Crystal Cavern

    Hey there! here to wind down Review Day and try to bring my team a win while also reading some great poetry! So, here are a few notes for you: ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Runaway- Chapter 2

    Back one more time today and I can say before I even read it that removing the bold lettering already looks better and is easier on the eyes to read. ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Runaway- Chapter 1.

    Back for more as promised. 1. While it was difficult to read the large chunk in the prologue, this is sooo much more. A few tips for breaking your work ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Runaway-Prologue

    Hey there :) welcome to YWS and Happy Review Day! Let's hop in 1. I would personally put a trigger warning for this, especially with hos the last sentence goes, ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Young Once Again

    Hey there and Happy Review Day as we wind down the stretch! Let's get to it 1. I love the overall feeling of raising poem. I always think that poem ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: 31 Hellish Halloween Tales (Part Three) (Tales 22-31)

    Hey there! I won't be reviewing all of these in one review, but I want you to get some outside opinions, so let me know once this is out of ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: Jikken-yō nezumi

    Hey there! Happy Review Day from the pumpkin teeeam. Let's hop right in. I'm not going in any specific order but just jotting down some thoughts. 1. I always love ...

    Oct 28, 2023


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