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  • Poetry » General, General Re: HATING HAVING

    Hi Io! Welcome to YWS (or nice seeing you for the first time). Here on behalf of the Knights of the Green Room and Team Tortoiss! I don't know what ...

    18h ago
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: By the End of the Day

    hi dystopia! welcome to yws. Let's hop right in, shall we? This particular serial killer, also known as the Countdown Killer, We dont need the AKA because we haven't been ...

    Yesterday
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Duel with the Emerald Dragon

    Hi Alice - I was going to review your other piece on the green room first, but soooomeone >.> got to it first, so I figured it wouldn't hurt to ...

    Aug 5
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Duel with the Emerald Dragon

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    Hi Alice - I was going to review your other piece on the green room first, but soooomeone >.> got to it first, so I figured it wouldn't hurt to ...

    Aug 5
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Studio {Prologue}

    Hi Spark! I don't know if I've ever read any of your prose before, and the title caught my eye, so here I am. Although, let's be honest, this is ...

    Aug 4
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: By Decree of the Blessed Court

    hiii I'm back again, Alice! I think I'll try to get to the rest of this folder as part of my team Tortoise, even if they get knocked out of ...

    Aug 4
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Blacksmith and the Phoenix's Fire

    Hiii I see that this is part of perhaps a larger world, but I hope that doesn't hinder me from being able to give you some good feedback on this ...

    Aug 3
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ashes to Ashes - A Short Story

    hi Bambi, and welcome to yws! When i review i mostly go in chronological order as I see stuff, and then tack on any additional summarizing thoughts. Okay…” I trailed ...

    Aug 3
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: The endoskeletons aren’t that scary

    Hi creepy! Here for the Knights Afterwatch! Endoskeletons caught my eye, so let's jump in. And I’m thinking that we could open up locations all around Utah, maybe around America, ...

    Aug 2
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Health Re: The desire for motherhood

    hiii happy review day. I hope all the feedback on this finds you well :] as a dad now there's a few things in here that just hit in ways ...

    Aug 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Agents Of Time: Chapter Twenty; Untangle the web.

    dun dun dun we have finally reached the end..Not.fonna lie that was a LOT of reading to do in one day but at least im finally caught up. Where to ...

    Aug 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Nineteen; Deadman walking

    okay so in light of recent events and devolved information, I am more just going to ramble here and not bother with quotations for a lot of what will probably ...

    Aug 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Agents Of Time: Chapter Eighteen; A ball of fate.

    ignore what I rambled about chapter 18 being the end, im at the point where I cant even read a chapter index properly apparently. Anyway, side note, but yay for ...

    Aug 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Seventeen; Who lives, who dies, who tells your story?

    and we. are. back. This looks like a shorter chapter (yay for mobile reviews) The adrenaline from the mission still hadn’t worn off. James was sprawled out in the common ...

    Aug 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Sixteen; To be or not to be, that is the question.

    The castle had been in a sot of tensioned quiet chaos since the meeting with the archduke tensioner quiet chaos....i feel like there's a better way to put this. Maybe ...

    Aug 1


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