MemoryHunter

Thank you for your review and suggestion! I was having trouble with those two lines, since I wanted every second and fifth line of each stanza to be just one ...

Thank you for your review! I admit I was having a little trouble with the line "how do I live when no man sings my tales", so your suggestion truly ...

Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it! :D

Not a review, but I just felt the need to say this - this is such a beautiful and creative piece! Especially loved the last line; it reminded me of ...

AYYYYYEEE! Awww thank you Rishik!

Yessss I'm Filipino!!! Maybe the 7,107 islands part gave too much away ahahaha. Thank you for your lovely review! I'll definitely check out your blog~

Yessss I'm Filipino!!! Maybe the 7,107 islands part gave too much away ahahaha. Thank you for your lovely review! I'll definitely check out your blog~

Yessss I'm Filipino!!! Maybe the 7,107 islands part gave too much away ahahaha. Thank you for your lovely review! I'll definitely check out your blog~

Glad you enjoyed it! :D

HELLO AND I AM HONORED THAT YOU CHOSE THIS TO BE THE FIRST POEM YOU WOULD REVIEW~ Your review wasn%u2019t harsh at all, it was actually pretty nice and I ...

ooooo thank you for your review! I will definitely fix some things here. I had a hard time coming up with words since I had to figure out how to ...

A year later, you have grown into such an amazing poet - and I believed in you! Your voice has shaped itself so beautifully. I'm shookt. (meanwhile i'm having crappy ...

Thank you for this wonderful review! I will certainly take into consideration all of the things you said. The fifth line was, in fact, a flashback. Happy new year and ...

Yo thanks for the review! As for the "think of me in the obsidian of your mind", I meant that the daughter wanted her father to remember her, to cherish ...

Thank you for this lovely review on my old poem! It's nice to look back :D