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Re: When Love Turns Into Mockery
Hi there, I'm here to review your poem~ Well, it turns out I have read this before but didn't review. Why ;-; Okay, first I'll start with the good stuff. ...
Dec 14, 2015 -
Re: Blue and Red
Hi, I'm here to review your poem~ I thought it was an interesting insight on the feelings of depression. I never would've described stress and depression better than this! I ...
Dec 14, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 4: A Lot of Introductions (To Eloise's Horror)
Hi this is a review again~ I'm hooked. That's why I'm giving you reviews like this. Anyways, let's start with the nitpicks! Slowly Eloise approached the door and with her ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 3: Ellington Academy
Hi, this is a review~ Er. Mah. Gerd. It's so awkward and funny in this 2nd chapter and I love that kind! I feel like the strong point of this ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: The South African Waterfront
The way you describe things is good. It's all fluffy and soothing and just makes me want to go the South African Waterfront too. Now, on to the nitpicks! First ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Running
Hi, this is a review~ I like the writing style and everything. It was a really interesting read, however I need more details on things. What was the setting like ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Forgotten Memories
I love the formatting! (Is it weird that instead of reading it normally, I read the left one while blocking my right ear and the right while blocking my left ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: foggy mirror
Hi, I'm here to review your poem~ I love the dark concept you have in mind. I love reading poems like this because they complement my whole being. I don't ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories
Hey, good sir! I'm here to review your 1st chapter. My first thought on this was that you knew the basics. It didn't interest me that much but I wanted ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: Luna Stark
Hi there, I'm here to review your work~ I'm not going to comment anything on the grammar because I tend to focus on the content of the work more and ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: Light After Darkness
Brilliant! The poem is very touching to my bones. It reminds me of my style before I entered yws but this is better xD Grammatically there is a mistake. For ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: Doll Disease
Hi there, I'm here to review this poem~ First off, when I read this poem, I was amazed by the words you put. I can relate to it in a ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: EMpty
Hi, I'm here to hunt them memories, but mostly to review this poem~ It's pretty *^* I can tell that you poured your feelings into this poem and I can ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: NOPE
Heeey I'm here to hunt memories but mostly to review this story~ This is my thoughts on the stories and it's all honest. Grammar? I don't do reviews on that. ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: The Show Shall go on
Hey, it seems that somebody is new here, like me! Well, I'm here to give you a review about this short story~ First off, I'm not going to correct the ...
Dec 9, 2015
