MemoryHunter

Hello, this is MemoryHunter here to review your prose! First off, I must say that I am in love with the way you describe the ocean. As a person who ...

Hmm... I smell something Filipino in YWS. >.>

Hey, it's MemoryHunter here to review your poem! :D Right off the bat, your poem reminds me of Japanese poetry or poems about nature in general. I like the metaphors ...

Hey, Memo here for a review~ Let me begin by emphasizing the point that Asith made previously - punctuation is important, especially in prose, especially in short stories. You have ...

ANALYZING THIS PER STANZA BECAUSE YOU'RE AN AWESOME PERSON I. From this point on, I was aware that your poem had a rhyming scheme going on. Since I am not ...

MEMORYHUNTER HERE FOR A REVIEW ON YOUR POEEEEM! Bear with me please, I'm a little rusty. This poem started out cool, and you have almost grasped the imagery part of ...

Hey there, it's Memoryhunter here to review your poem! First of all, I have to say that I haven't reviewed in a long time, so this might be a little ...

Hey it's MemoryHunter here to review your short story~ There is nothing wrong with this short story, however I felt that you could improve the transition between the second to ...

OoOOOOO Hey there it's MemoryHunter here to review your poem~ I like this poem, especially the last line. You have this habit of leaving a thought to the readers after ...

Hey it's MemoryHunter~ Aw, this poem was so cute, short and neat! I don't have anything to say really, because that last line was just so sweet. I'm not usually ...

Okay, this was an interesting piece. Hey there, it's MemoryHunter here to review your short story~ So, let's go to the beginning. At first, I was a little bit shocked ...

HEYYO DUUUDE. MemoryHunter here~ One thing I noticed in this poem (lyrical poem?) is that you lacked punctuation. In poetry, even the little things matter, and lack of punctuation may ...

Hey there, it's Memory the MemoryHunter here~ Often times in poetry, punctuation is not regarded because it depends on one poet to another. However, I just would like to improve ...

Hey, Memory for a quickie~ based on my inference, I'm guessing this is a flash fic. I'm not good at flash fics - but I do write feature stories which ...

Heyheyhey Mad! This poem was really authentic - and not the bad, too-authentic kind, but the bittersweet kind that leaves us hanging. Especially that last stanza, since it's just this ...