MelawenWillow

Hello and welcome to YWS!!! First of all, this was quite good. Very suspenseful, very intriguing. It arouses a lot of questions from the reader. Your writing style was great! ...

Hellewww!! This was captivating. I only wish it wasn't so short. I am personally not the biggest fan of zombies or zombie-like creatures, but i think you're really onto something ...

Hi Elizabeth1! So fist of all, I really like the repetition that you've used through out. It helps to communicate your point very well. There is a very nice flow ...

Welcome to YWS!!! Now, for your work. I like it! This is quite philosophical but at the same time easy to relate to. It's honest, and I like the point ...

This almost put me to tears. I'm not even kidding. This poem is very evocative, sweet, and sincere. I think that it's a very good interpretation of the feeling of ...

Hello! Here goes: First of all, good job setting the atmosphere for this poem. It's calm and peaceful and heart breaking, and it stirs up some emotions. Nice one! Second, ...

Hi! First of all, I must say good job!!!! This was Fan- flipping- tastic! I really really enjoyed reading this. You've got some really good writing skills, and you put ...

Hullo! Huh. Well, it was very interesting. I liked your word choice. It was creative. But I don't get it. I get some of the plot, like how there's Scatty ...

Hola! So I have to say, this was very enjoyable to read. I felt that you developed the characters well, and the dialogue was insightful. I feel that you should ...

Hallo! First of all, let me say I was surprised. It was a good surprise, but a surprise nonetheless. I have no doubt that this is real poetry. You're saying ...

Hello there! First of all, let me say awesome job! I really liked the rhyme scheme you had going on there. "The fury burned, as fire made;", I did not ...