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Re: Lullaby
Hey, katngo73! ScytheMeister here to review :) This was a masterpiece! I loved the realism of it and how well the emotions were portrayed. Although it didn't go into too ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: The Sun Has Set Again
Hey, Ishan212! Scythe here for a quick review :) This was great, I could see great potential within the poem except it was a little rough and needs major improvements ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: You
Hey, Mockingjay78! Scythe here to do a quick review :) First of all, this poem isn't sorted into stanzas. If you are unaware of that layout then I highly suggest ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Clarity
Hey there, Princess :) This might be a little late, but I got interesting so I'm going to review this work! This was intriguing, I enjoyed it's depth. It's fairly ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Mirrors
Hey, Onlyhuman! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This is such a beautiful topic to cover, we all experience self-concept and in this case, it was the negative ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: good bye version 2
Hey, ElizabethLovelace! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This will be really short, since the work is short itself so I'll try to make this as helpful as ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Eyes of Memories
Hey, UsingName! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This is some great work, I loved the concept; it was so bittersweet. There were, of course, some issues with ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Words
Hey, Keumgan! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This was so quirky and funny—I loved it! Writer's block can be so miserable and irritating (I should know, I've ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: i left.
Hey, primadonna! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This was beautiful , I loved the imagery and the raw emotion—it seemed almost real. The portrayal of the person ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: The Cycle
Hey there, Payalphukan! Scythe here to do a review :) This is some great work, especially for your first published work on the site so great job! There were some ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Death Note of the Philippines
Hey, outvaders! Scythe here for a quick review, finally. I look forward to reading your work for the first time. :D I'm not familiar with flash fiction (this is my ...
Apr 10, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing
Hey, BlueAfrica! Scythe here for a review :) This'll be my first time reading and reviewing some of your work, I think, so I hope I can give you some ...
Apr 9, 2017 -
Re: at two in boarding
Hey there, regismare! Scythe here to review, as promised (albeit a little late, sorry!) It's a pleasure to be finally reading some of your work (I don't believe I have ...
Apr 9, 2017 -
Re: Knowing Gods chapter 1 (Third draft)
Hey, Occymay! Scythe here for a review, as promised :) First of all, I'll make some small nitpicky comments. This is a bit of a personal preference, but I would ...
Apr 5, 2017 -
Re: Empty Draft
Hey, Kara! Scythe here again for another review ^-^ First of all, I loved the beginning so much! “Mama?” No answer. “Mama?” Nothing answers except for the silence singing in ...
Apr 4, 2017
