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Previously ScytheMeister

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lullaby

    Hey, katngo73! ScytheMeister here to review :) This was a masterpiece! I loved the realism of it and how well the emotions were portrayed. Although it didn't go into too ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The Sun Has Set Again

    Hey, Ishan212! Scythe here for a quick review :) This was great, I could see great potential within the poem except it was a little rough and needs major improvements ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: You

    Hey, Mockingjay78! Scythe here to do a quick review :) First of all, this poem isn't sorted into stanzas. If you are unaware of that layout then I highly suggest ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Clarity

    Hey there, Princess :) This might be a little late, but I got interesting so I'm going to review this work! This was intriguing, I enjoyed it's depth. It's fairly ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mirrors

    Hey, Onlyhuman! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This is such a beautiful topic to cover, we all experience self-concept and in this case, it was the negative ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: good bye version 2

    Hey, ElizabethLovelace! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This will be really short, since the work is short itself so I'll try to make this as helpful as ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Eyes of Memories

    Hey, UsingName! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This is some great work, I loved the concept; it was so bittersweet. There were, of course, some issues with ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Words

    Hey, Keumgan! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This was so quirky and funny—I loved it! Writer's block can be so miserable and irritating (I should know, I've ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: i left.

    Hey, primadonna! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This was beautiful , I loved the imagery and the raw emotion—it seemed almost real. The portrayal of the person ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Cycle

    Hey there, Payalphukan! Scythe here to do a review :) This is some great work, especially for your first published work on the site so great job! There were some ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Death Note of the Philippines

    Hey, outvaders! Scythe here for a quick review, finally. I look forward to reading your work for the first time. :D I'm not familiar with flash fiction (this is my ...

    Apr 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing

    Hey, BlueAfrica! Scythe here for a review :) This'll be my first time reading and reviewing some of your work, I think, so I hope I can give you some ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: at two in boarding

    Hey there, regismare! Scythe here to review, as promised (albeit a little late, sorry!) It's a pleasure to be finally reading some of your work (I don't believe I have ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Knowing Gods chapter 1 (Third draft)

    Hey, Occymay! Scythe here for a review, as promised :) First of all, I'll make some small nitpicky comments. This is a bit of a personal preference, but I would ...

    Apr 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Empty Draft

    Hey, Kara! Scythe here again for another review ^-^ First of all, I loved the beginning so much! “Mama?” No answer. “Mama?” Nothing answers except for the silence singing in ...

    Apr 4, 2017


We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind