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Previously ScytheMeister

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lullaby

    Hey, katngo73! ScytheMeister here to review :) This was a masterpiece! I loved the realism of it and how well the emotions were portrayed. Although it didn't go into too ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The Sun Has Set Again

    Hey, Ishan212! Scythe here for a quick review :) This was great, I could see great potential within the poem except it was a little rough and needs major improvements ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: You

    Hey, Mockingjay78! Scythe here to do a quick review :) First of all, this poem isn't sorted into stanzas. If you are unaware of that layout then I highly suggest ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Clarity

    Hey there, Princess :) This might be a little late, but I got interesting so I'm going to review this work! This was intriguing, I enjoyed it's depth. It's fairly ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mirrors

    Hey, Onlyhuman! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This is such a beautiful topic to cover, we all experience self-concept and in this case, it was the negative ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: good bye version 2

    Hey, ElizabethLovelace! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This will be really short, since the work is short itself so I'll try to make this as helpful as ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Eyes of Memories

    Hey, UsingName! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This is some great work, I loved the concept; it was so bittersweet. There were, of course, some issues with ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Words

    Hey, Keumgan! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This was so quirky and funny—I loved it! Writer's block can be so miserable and irritating (I should know, I've ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: i left.

    Hey, primadonna! Scythe here to do a quick review :) This was beautiful , I loved the imagery and the raw emotion—it seemed almost real. The portrayal of the person ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Cycle

    Hey there, Payalphukan! Scythe here to do a review :) This is some great work, especially for your first published work on the site so great job! There were some ...

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Death Note of the Philippines

    Hey, outvaders! Scythe here for a quick review, finally. I look forward to reading your work for the first time. :D I'm not familiar with flash fiction (this is my ...

    Apr 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing

    Hey, BlueAfrica! Scythe here for a review :) This'll be my first time reading and reviewing some of your work, I think, so I hope I can give you some ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: at two in boarding

    Hey there, regismare! Scythe here to review, as promised (albeit a little late, sorry!) It's a pleasure to be finally reading some of your work (I don't believe I have ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Knowing Gods chapter 1 (Third draft)

    Hey, Occymay! Scythe here for a review, as promised :) First of all, I'll make some small nitpicky comments. This is a bit of a personal preference, but I would ...

    Apr 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Empty Draft

    Hey, Kara! Scythe here again for another review ^-^ First of all, I loved the beginning so much! “Mama?” No answer. “Mama?” Nothing answers except for the silence singing in ...

    Apr 4, 2017


If I'm going to burn, it might as well be bright.
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