Megrim

Thanks for the review! The "dark skin" is actually because the character is black, which probably makes the whole story make a lot more sense! Glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you! I guess I'll keep my mouth shut then :X This was a fantastic review.

Thanks for all the reviews! For this one, which paragraph in particular did you feel wasn't as powerful, or was too short/long? And yes, you are right that this is ...

Thanks for the review! The aim of this one was an exercise in dialogue-only, to convey everything without the aid of tags and narrative.

Thanks for the review! Interesting perspective, whenever people misinterpret on a first read, it always makes me sit and think a while!

Thanks for the review! I only started writing FF recently myself. It's a strange world, for sure! Very different to long form writing :S

Thanks!

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

What are some examples of words you'd replace with stronger synonyms here?

Thanks for the fantastic review! *Takes notes* (I'm not sure what I'm even going to do with these flash pieces... but they are fun!)

I think it makes sense for Northerners to hate Necromancers, but still, killing another human is a big deal, no matter who they are. I understood Vlad's explanation, but somehow ...

Easier to overwrite and then cut, you're right! Good luck!

Sure thing! Can't wait.

No problem! They are short and easy to read. Tag me if you want more things reviewed ^^

That makes sense, maybe you could highlight that a bit? Does he recognize it for what it is?