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Re: Shadowsong: Chapter 1.2
Hi! Onto ch1, which was a lot more fun and engaging than the prologue, and has a lot to love--but also a few of the confusion pitfalls we saw in ...
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: Shadowsong: Chapter 1.1
Since this one is short I just went ahead and read the whole thing before commenting. There are some gems in here, but unfortunately, they're buried in a lot of ...
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: Huntress, Chapter 1: Pack (Book 1 in the Wolfsbane Chronicles)
Hi! FINALLY here to review. (I always get to them, the question is more... when :P) I'm going to type as I read for this one, so let's get started. ...
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: Settlement
Hi there, Megrim strikes again. I admit I skimmed this one, because of things I've talked about before. Everything seems happy and positive. Stuff is going very well for the ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Wakers and Sleepers
I really liked this one, but it didn't quite "wow" me, and I think a lot of that is that the "twist" at the end felt a little... flat? Like ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: The Lion Guard
This one is a cute story, and I really like the lions (that's what I was expecting to happen, too). I guess my only complaint is that I don't care/like ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Fateful Fortune
I'm back for more, but this time I don't actually have much to say. I really liked this one. I thought everything about it was well-written. It has a complete ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Electric Dessert
This totally wasn't what I would have guessed based on the title xD Content-wise, idk, I'm not sure I have an opinion one way or another. There are things I ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: The Unplanned Funeral
Onward we go! And I bet after the last few, you're expecting me to say how not a story this is, but in fact, I think it fulfills my criteria. ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Tidal Wave
Wow! This one's pretty intense! This one draws me more towards prose technique as opposed to content, because I think the content is pretty solid. To recall back to my ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: The Duck Race
Hello again, this time with a follow-up to my previous one, which was the review all about stakes and choices. I want to briefly reiterate that here. I'm curious if ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Movie Night
Hi again! I'll be hitting these kind of at random because I opened up a whole bunch in new tabs and now have no idea what order they were in ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Blood Supply
Hi! Finally here for some reviewing. I'll do more than one to make up for it. So there's a lot I liked about this short story, especially the unifying theme ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 3: Chapter 5
Aha, so it is summer. I wonder where they get the ice from. Why are they whispering about her? Bad reputation? For how much she didn't want to be involved ...
Nov 21, 2016 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 3: Chapter 4
I stand in the dark, clouds cover the stars and moon leaving me with only the few lights coming from the palace. This sentence confused me for a bit. Then ...
Nov 21, 2016
