Megrim

Onto chapter 1! A lot of readers skip prologues, so it's good to plan your chapter 1 to have a strong hook that can stand on its own. Right away ...

Hello! Here to review as requested. Let's get started! Neat banner up top, by the way. I like this introduction to the story! We've got conflict and stakes established quickly, ...

Hi! Sorry for the delay, I needed to catch up a bit on my WRFF requests. Back for 1.4 and today I'm going to try typing down comments as I ...

This one is very cute, and has a similar otherworldly quality to the witch story, maybe because of the repetition. Actually now that I think about it, I think it ...

:D I only have one comment about this one. Honestly, I LOVED IT. It's beautiful and perfect. It has imagery, it has character, it makes you stop and think. It's ...

Hey there! Thought I'd give myself a break from reviewing novels and stop by this once since it's so short. Will probably look at a few of the others, too. ...

Big exciting battle and the last submission you have up! It's been a long haul, but here we are. And what a great note to end on. I love the ...

Let's see if I can't crank out the last two reviews tonight! I like how it starts out in the tunnel. Interesting right from the get-go. I'm not sure if ...

Hi again, back for more. I'm debating a little bit on how to approach my critique here, because honestly, this chapter tried my patience. We've already talked plenty about pacing ...

Onto the next chapter. I found this one a bit slow, not really giving us a whole lot for its length. If you boil it down to its essence, there's ...

Onward we go, and this chapter I both like and dislike. At its core, I love what it's trying to do. I love the quiet, character drama chapters. There's good ...

Hi there! Saw this in the green room and thought it would be fun to try and review it. However, I REALLY don't know what I'm talking about that, so ...

Back for more and excited to keep going! This chapter was another well-timed reprieve after the action of before--the "sequel" to its "scene," as they say. I especially liked how ...

Hello again! I'm excited to visit the next installment and I hope you get another up soon. I like the story, especially the sciency-ness, and the characters (the side characters ...

Onto chapter one! Still loving the premise. However, I admit to finding myself rather confused. A few things confused me, especially at the beginning. While some became more clear over ...