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Re: Eos, Chapter 5.1: Back on the Job
Hm, I'm pretty sure I do have a line about that there somewhere, but it clearly needs to be more obvious. :p And yes, yell at me, cause it probably ...
Oct 1, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 3.2: The Past and the Present
ALSO I just noticed the Miss Mea and I love it
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 5.1: Back on the Job
Man, you went on a roll! Hm, it concerns me a little that it's not clear that there are lots of people living outside Eos and the rebels, because that's ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 3.2: The Past and the Present
I have indeed read the Uglies series, and now that you mention it, I definitely see the similarities :P Man, maybe I should re-read it, it's been ages... Those are ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: A letter to my mother tongue
Hey there! I just saw this and wanted to let you know that in order to get points for a comment on someone's work, you need to click the "Is ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Clockwork
Haha, that's not a bad battle strategy! Your interpretation of the poem is pretty much correct - I wasn't specifically thinking of God when I wrote it, more like a ...
Sep 29, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 1.1
Glad the review was helpful! I'll definitely get to your poem today. :)
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 5.1: Back on the Job
Thanks for the review! Moral gray is probably pretty accurate about Dameon lol, though I'd say it's more of a thing where he really really wants to do the right ...
Sep 26, 2018 -
Re: So Many Lost Ones - II
You're welcome! And hm, I still think the bold is too odd to really work. I think you could get away with having both Lukas' thoughts and Tino's parts be ...
Sep 25, 2018 -
Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 2 *rewrite*
That makes a lot of sense! Thanks for the explanation.
Sep 24, 2018 -
Re: A chain breaks at its strongest
Glad my review helped! I'd definitely accept the tradeoff of a longer piece if it means more depth. I personally don't feel that these piece is very long at the ...
Sep 24, 2018 -
Re: Frazil
"Make it brief" I say and this is like my longest review in two weeks lol. xD
Sep 21, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 3: The Underground
I totally get how you feel about the Easter eggs. I'm really proud of all the hints I managed to place in here because it's something I'm trying to learn ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 2.3: An Unwanted Mission
Hey! Sorry, I forgot to reply to this lol. Thanks so much for the review! You make lots of good points always. Oh, and one thing about the dupes - ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: The Amber Balance -Chapter 3
You're very welcome! I'm glad the review helped, and thanks for telling me a bit about your thought process. :)
Sep 19, 2018
