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Re: Be You, The Real You lies within Yourself…
Hey there, I saw this and thought I'd get it out of the Green Room for you. :) I think this is a really good idea for a book, and ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Writing ailments; their common symptoms, causes and general first aid.
Hey there! Since I saw this earlier and thought it was pretty cool, I figured I'd drop a review on it. First of, how did you get this table on ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 7.1]
Hey there! I've almost caught up now! Let's dive right into it. I like this scene with their father here - you pretty clearly show that he's a jerk without ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 6.3 - Intermission]
Ooh, I like this! Answers galore! I'm really glad we got the explanation from the lights - and it makes sense too. I like how they all have their own ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 6.2 - Intermission]
I'm back! Overall, I like this part more than the last one - it clears up a few more things. So, to my understanding, this is how it goes: Faris ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 6.1 - Intermission]
*Bursts through the door dramatically* I have escaped from the clutches of that horrible beast called Life! I can now review as I please! Yeah...sorry this took so long to ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 5.3]
Hey there! I'm finally here! I have now caught up, and I figured I'd start reviewing here. General Thoughts So Far So, your plot is really interesting, and it seems ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: Hollow Words
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. :D Overall, I like the sentiment of the poem. The idea that poetry is so important is definitely something I can agree ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Telekhines
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. So, overall, this is a pretty cool concept, writing from the telekhines' point of view and telling the story of ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Anticlimactic Monochrome Scenery ||| Cancer Didn't Kill Her: Questionable Friends
Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. :D So, this is quite a good start. You introduce the main conflict right away, which is always nice, and it ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The way "Karma" changed my life
Hey there! I'm here to drop a review on this. :) Your introduction starts off pretty strongly. Not many problems there. However, parts of your writing are a bit confusing, ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The Influence of the Sun
Hey there, and happy Review Day! I thought I'd drop a review on this little piece. Overall, it's not bad. It seems like a nice, slow start to a sweet ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: lune morte
So, since you haven't gotten many reviews yet, I thought I'd come back and give you a review on what is probably my new favorite poem on here. And I'll ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Deception - Chapter One - Words Betray
Okay, I'm finally here for the review you asked me for. Sorry it took so long. First off, this chapter is much, much too long. I copy/pasted it into a ...
Nov 4, 2015 -
Re: A Light for Tomorrow - Chapter 1.1
Hey there! I'm here for a review on this. I'm sorry it took me a while to get around to it - I've been rather sick over the last couple ...
Nov 2, 2015