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Back again! Overall, another good chapter. I was sitting on top of the main building, but I felt like I was on top of the world. It was just Diana ...

Dang. This is intense. But yeah, I'm back again for another review. I actually really like how you're using the narration to drop little hints about things - one of ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this review day! I know you said in your description that you didn't care if it was too long and didn't get ...

Hey there! I'm back again for another Review Day, crawling slowly through your story. So wow! I really like this over-the-phone method of conveying what's going on with Divinity and ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this review day. I apologize for not having read previous chapters, and if anything I say doesn't apply because of that, ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review, and I apologize if it's kind of short, as I'm finding little to say. I know I've reviewed a few parts of ...

Hey there! I'm here for a review on this on this fine review day. So, I think you have a pretty good start here. I thought the plot you have ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this Review Day. I actually really liked this start. This sort of novel really isn't to my taste, but it was well-written ...

All right, last one. Let's do this. Overall, this was a decent chapter. I like that we're seeing more of Paula and starting to learn what's going on with her. ...

Back again! I think this is my favorite chapter so far. It's just so nice that they get to sit down for a bit and talk through some of these ...

Back again! Gonna try to finish these off before I vanish for a week in a couple days. Okay, Josette is freaking creepy. Like, wow, you did a good job ...

Hey there! Back again, etc. :D Hilda lands, injured but alive This got me worried for a second - it made me think she was seriously injured. But then she ...

Hey, I'm back again! I'm hoping to have these finished by Sunday. I liked this chapter! Very action-packed and awesome, especially after Owen was dying and Hilda was just like ...

Back again. Sorry if this one's super disjointed. Something I noticed is that you're switching POVs again. I know this is technically omniscient POV and so I know it's largely ...

Back again. I forgot how old Owen is, but I definitely feel like he's older than Hilda. He's just so serious. I'm also kind of skeptical about the whole beds ...