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Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Chapter 8
Hey there, I'm here for a quick review on this review day. I think I've reviewed a few parts of this, so I know somewhat of what's going on. Small ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 23
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day! Overall, this isn't bad at all! I like you keep it kind of short and snappy in ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.17)
Hey there, back again. Lucky you, you get what is (probably) my last review of the day. So sorry if it's absolutely incoherent, I've been reviewing steadily for about 6 ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Magic Survives- Chapter 3: Threats
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day, and I apologize in advance for not having read previous parts. I hope my review will be ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: YJ:Darkeid Chapter 1:Changed
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day. Sorry if things I say don't make sense, as I'm very tired at the moment. So...this is ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 2 (more action less detailed:/)
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this review day to get this out of the Green Room. Sorry if I repeat anything previous reviewers have said. Let's ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter Three
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this review day, and I apologize in advance for not having read previous parts. If I say something wrong because of that, ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: I didn't know- NaNoWriMo project 2015 - Chapter 3
Hey there! I'm back again for another review - don't worry, I read your other chapter before reading this one. Also, I'm pretty tired, so sorry if stuff I say ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Wandering to the Raggedy Edge
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this Review Day. So this was an interesting story, but there are some simple things that could help make it better ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Cuddle Application 2: Fran's and Ex-Friends
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this Review Day. I apologize in advance for not having read previous chapters - feel free to ignore any errors resulting ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.16)
Hey there! I'm back for another review. So, this is kind of a nice, if quiet part. It's good to see that Divinity is perfectly fine. I like the interactions ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 28
Back again! It looks like this is the last chapter you've published so far. I hope you're still working on this, even if you've decided not to publish them anymore. ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 27
Back again! Another excellent chapter. I thought it ended rather abruptly, and not really in a place that felt intuitive for a cliffhanger. Small things: I swing an arm over ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 26
Hey there! It's been a while since I've reviewed any of these, but I've decided to come back for Review Day. This is chilling, this really is. You're doing an ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 40
Back again! Overall, another good chapter. I was sitting on top of the main building, but I felt like I was on top of the world. It was just Diana ...
Jun 26, 2016
