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Re: Novel (first 4 chapters)
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day. Sorry if I repeat anything previous reviewers have said. Try to shorten your paragraphs - that will ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 9:56 pm -
Re: My Life in a Bizarre Town: Chapter 8
Hey there, I'm here for a quick review on this review day. I think I've reviewed a few parts of this, so I know somewhat of what's going on. Small ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 9:47 pm -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 23
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day! Overall, this isn't bad at all! I like you keep it kind of short and snappy in ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 9:41 pm -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.17)
Hey there, back again. Lucky you, you get what is (probably) my last review of the day. So sorry if it's absolutely incoherent, I've been reviewing steadily for about 6 ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 12:33 pm -
Re: Magic Survives- Chapter 3: Threats
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day, and I apologize in advance for not having read previous parts. I hope my review will be ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 12:22 pm -
Re: YJ:Darkeid Chapter 1:Changed
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day. Sorry if things I say don't make sense, as I'm very tired at the moment. So...this is ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 12:14 pm -
Re: Chapter 2 (more action less detailed:/)
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this review day to get this out of the Green Room. Sorry if I repeat anything previous reviewers have said. Let's ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 11:12 am -
Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter Three
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this review day, and I apologize in advance for not having read previous parts. If I say something wrong because of that, ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 10:44 am -
Re: I didn't know- NaNoWriMo project 2015 - Chapter 3
Hey there! I'm back again for another review - don't worry, I read your other chapter before reading this one. Also, I'm pretty tired, so sorry if stuff I say ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 10:31 am -
Re: Wandering to the Raggedy Edge
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this Review Day. So this was an interesting story, but there are some simple things that could help make it better ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 10:18 am -
Re: Cuddle Application 2: Fran's and Ex-Friends
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this Review Day. I apologize in advance for not having read previous chapters - feel free to ignore any errors resulting ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 10:08 am -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 3.16)
Hey there! I'm back for another review. So, this is kind of a nice, if quiet part. It's good to see that Divinity is perfectly fine. I like the interactions ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 9:27 am -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 28
Back again! It looks like this is the last chapter you've published so far. I hope you're still working on this, even if you've decided not to publish them anymore. ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 8:37 am -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 27
Back again! Another excellent chapter. I thought it ended rather abruptly, and not really in a place that felt intuitive for a cliffhanger. Small things: I swing an arm over ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 8:18 am -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 26
Hey there! It's been a while since I've reviewed any of these, but I've decided to come back for Review Day. This is chilling, this really is. You're doing an ...
Sun Jun 26, 2016 7:48 am
