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Hey meg! Thought I'd give this a review today. This is a solid opening. You start right out with your characters, and there's just two of them, so the reader ...

Hey, dark. Thought I'd drop by and review this, seeing as it's still in the Green Room. So, not bad. I like the third person. I haven't read the ones ...

Hey there! This has been in the Green Room for long enough - let's get it reviewed! I actually really enjoyed this. I'm not at all familiar with the story ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this evening. I like the feel of this chapter. It's rather atmospheric, brought about by your honestly quite nice description. You spend ...

Hey there. I thought I'd drop by to review this for you. So, Arthurian legend-type stuff. Cool. The magic seems fairly interesting, but I think you may have jumped in ...

Hey there. Haven't read previous parts, so just going to roll with what I see here. So, unless my memory is very wrong, this is pretty much a rewrite of ...

Hey there! I'm here for another review for you. I'll admit - this was fairly funny. Not in a laugh-out-loud kind of way, but just in a way where you ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. I really like the core concept here. It's clever and feels very well-developed, enough that I almost forgot I was reading a ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. Overall, this isn't too bad. It's definitely an interesting start to the story, and I really like how you make the setting ...

Hey there! Though I'd drop by to review this. This was really great. I love the unreliable narrator, even if it is temporary, and I think it's really clever that ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review today. Overall, this is fairly smooth to read. It doesn't immediately grab my attention, but at the same time I do like ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, this isn't bad. You clearly have a very good handle on all your characters and what's going on, and this seems ...

Hey, this is really nice. Like, I was really hooked reading this and I'd love to read more if you're still writing it. It's a very well put together beginning. ...

Hey there, I thought I'd drop by and review this for you. I'm sure that by this point you've gotten your assignment back and know your grade. Hopefully it was ...

Yay! Discussion and exposition (I assume) will be forthcoming! You said in chat this was unedited, and to be honest, I can tell - you have a few more awkward ...