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Re: Not dying, but falling in love
All right, I'm here for the review you asked me to do! Fair warning: I'm a bit rusty and generally not amazing at reviewing poetry. Kaos' review was really good ...
Sat Sep 10, 2016 10:43 am -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 1 - The Message and the Mission (Part 2)
Hey meg! Thought I'd give this a review today. This is a solid opening. You start right out with your characters, and there's just two of them, so the reader ...
Sat Sep 10, 2016 6:59 am -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season Three: Episode 1, Rosy Locks
Hey, dark. Thought I'd drop by and review this, seeing as it's still in the Green Room. So, not bad. I like the third person. I haven't read the ones ...
Sat Sep 10, 2016 1:42 am -
Re: RWBY (Midori) - Ninja Kombat and Cookies
Hey there! This has been in the Green Room for long enough - let's get it reviewed! I actually really enjoyed this. I'm not at all familiar with the story ...
Sat Sep 10, 2016 1:17 am -
Re: "introductions"
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review this evening. I like the feel of this chapter. It's rather atmospheric, brought about by your honestly quite nice description. You spend ...
Fri Sep 09, 2016 11:52 am -
Re: Not *quite* an intro
Hey there. I thought I'd drop by to review this for you. So, Arthurian legend-type stuff. Cool. The magic seems fairly interesting, but I think you may have jumped in ...
Fri Sep 09, 2016 11:24 am -
Re: .
Hey there. Haven't read previous parts, so just going to roll with what I see here. So, unless my memory is very wrong, this is pretty much a rewrite of ...
Thu Sep 08, 2016 12:02 pm -
Re: House Of Kehila (Episode 2)
Hey there! I'm here for another review for you. I'll admit - this was fairly funny. Not in a laugh-out-loud kind of way, but just in a way where you ...
Thu Sep 08, 2016 11:28 am -
Re: Misellus
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. I really like the core concept here. It's clever and feels very well-developed, enough that I almost forgot I was reading a ...
Wed Sep 07, 2016 11:18 pm -
Re: The Golden Boy
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. Overall, this isn't too bad. It's definitely an interesting start to the story, and I really like how you make the setting ...
Wed Sep 07, 2016 12:10 pm -
Re: The Winter Sniper- Prologue (Title pending...)
Hey there! Though I'd drop by to review this. This was really great. I love the unreliable narrator, even if it is temporary, and I think it's really clever that ...
Wed Sep 07, 2016 11:39 am -
Re: Ascension/Chapter One
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review today. Overall, this is fairly smooth to read. It doesn't immediately grab my attention, but at the same time I do like ...
Tue Sep 06, 2016 10:09 pm -
Re: Secrets of the Forgotten
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. So, this isn't bad. You clearly have a very good handle on all your characters and what's going on, and this seems ...
Tue Sep 06, 2016 12:10 pm -
Re: The Nature of Dreams
Hey, this is really nice. Like, I was really hooked reading this and I'd love to read more if you're still writing it. It's a very well put together beginning. ...
Tue Sep 06, 2016 10:46 am -
Re: The Woman of the Sea
Hey there, I thought I'd drop by and review this for you. I'm sure that by this point you've gotten your assignment back and know your grade. Hopefully it was ...
Tue Sep 06, 2016 4:09 am
