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Re: Whomerlock Chapter 12
These just keep getting better and better. I liked how this one was mostly in Merlin's viewpoint - since he's one of the "normal" characters in terms of thought process, ...
Oct 22, 2016 -
Re: Republican Fairytales
Thought I'd go ahead and leave a review on this today. Just a preface: I realize this is entirely satire and that you don't necessarily think all or even most ...
Oct 22, 2016 -
Re: Absence makes the heart grow fonder
Hey, Kaos, I'm here as requested. :) So, this is what I jokingly call "deep" poetry, and I am neither very good at writing it nor reviewing it, but I'll ...
Oct 18, 2016 -
Re: Whomerlock Chapter 11
Back again as always. :) (That cliffhanger though.) I love how John just shoots Morgana, though of course I'm also mildly concerned for her wellbeing. But only mildly. I also ...
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: The Poker Game: An Introduction to the Cast of Characters.
Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and review this for my final RevMo review. :D So, I think this is cool, and overall works pretty well. I was really ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: 24 Hours -- A Thriller pt 2
This is really good. And now I'm going to try to review it. I enjoyed this a lot, even though I don't usually read thriller. I like your main character ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: Emmy
Hey there! I thought I'd go ahead and review this today. I kind of have a soft spot for these sorts of letters that tell a story because when done ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: Irrationality - Monday
Hey Pen! This looked interesting, so I thought I'd come and review it today. I thought the format, with just dialogue going back and forth, was really interesting, especially combined ...
Sep 29, 2016 -
Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 10
Hey there - I thought I'd go ahead and review this today. I apologize that I haven't read previous parts, and I'll keep that in mind as I go along. ...
Sep 28, 2016 -
Re: What's Left of Us
Hey Alice marmalade! I felt like reviewing an nice short story today. There's a lot of good stuff in this piece. It's very smooth to read, its foundation is solid, ...
Sep 27, 2016 -
Re: Cat Steps Chapter 3.2
Hi Rosey. :) I thought I'd attempt to give this a review. I really enjoyed this, to be honest. I like the perpetual underlying sense of conflict between your main ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: The double life
Hey there Desiree, and welcome to YWS! I thought I'd go ahead and review this chapter you posted. I thought this was a very interesting start, and I like the ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: same.
Hey Candy! Thought I'd drop by and review this this Review Day. I quite like this - I took away from it that it was about, well, sameness, and feeling ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: porcelain
Okay so this is really honestly beautiful, and I'm going to attempt to review it but it may not actually be of any help, so sorry in advance. I love ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 7
Hello there! I'm here to give this a review on this lovely Review Day. My apologies for not having read the previous parts of this chapter. Overall, this seems like ...
Sep 25, 2016
