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Re: Chapter 7 (TRYCOLOUR'S P.O.V.)
Hey! I'm here for a quick review this Review Day! Overall, this is really quite good. I think you managed to do the exposition at the beginning well, moving into ...
Thu Dec 29, 2016 11:52 pm -
Re: Incorporate Success Indicators in Software Change Control Model for Minimizing Change Effects
Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this. I'm afraid YWS isn't the place to find experts on these topics, but I'll do the best I can anyway. ...
Thu Dec 29, 2016 11:40 pm -
Re: Risk Management in I.T Outsourcing Projects in Pakistan
Hey, I'm here for a review. So, I don't see this type of stuff normally on YWS, and I don't think many people here know enough about this topic to ...
Thu Dec 29, 2016 11:27 pm -
Re: Insidious Chapter Four- The Present
Ah, this is much more my forte than lyrics. Also, quick note, works with the f-word in them are actually required to be rated 18+, so I've gone through and ...
Wed Dec 21, 2016 3:07 am -
Re: You only love me when I'm leavin'
Ooh, this piece is quite strong. Your chorus sells the whole piece, it really does, giving a strong basis that you expand on pretty nicely. I would nitpick that you ...
Wed Dec 21, 2016 2:24 am -
Re: Red and Blue
More lyrics, yay. (And the only semblance of order I'm going in with this is first ones that are still in the GR, then everything else. :P) First stanza meanders, ...
Wed Dec 21, 2016 2:02 am -
Re: Say hello to goodbye
All right, let's get started. By my count, I've got 10 reviews for you and I'm going to try to do them all in the next two hours. I'd be ...
Wed Dec 21, 2016 1:40 am -
Re: Atana: Chapter 2
Back again! Oooh, Atana's getting a little bit freaky. This is quite interesting. I do feel that yes, considering the payoff it would probably have been better to have the ...
Tue Dec 20, 2016 11:35 am -
Re: Atana: Chapter 1
Hey there! I'm finally here for the review you asked for. This is an okay start. To be quite honest, it didn't immediately grab my attention, but nor did it ...
Tue Dec 20, 2016 4:20 am -
Re: You
I'm here for the review you requested in my thread! Also, just a note as a moderator: I've bumped the rating on this from 16+ to 18+ for the use ...
Mon Dec 19, 2016 4:05 am -
Re: Mister Dodt
Hey there! I'm here to do the review you requested. So, I'm not quite sure what you want me to do with this. This sounds like an interesting character, and ...
Mon Dec 19, 2016 2:57 am -
Re: I'm a slave(Edited)
This is good. Very cohesive, with strong imagery, and definitely miles better than the edited version. But I've already told you a few of the things I think you could ...
Mon Dec 05, 2016 12:10 am -
Re: Deleted 71
Sorry about the delay with this review, and thanks for the request! I liked this (obviously). It worked for me in a way this extremely free style of poetry often ...
Sat Nov 26, 2016 7:49 am -
Re: An Impromptu Battle
Oooh, more Merlin fanfiction! And Uther's being so niiiice why can't he be like that on the TV show? :( Time marches on... Anyway, this was sweet and adorable and ...
Wed Nov 23, 2016 9:55 am -
Re: Wakers and Sleepers
I'm here for a review! Lets see if I can get this one in faster than @Casanova. This piece feels rather bare-bones. We get a simple introduction about the girl ...
Wed Nov 23, 2016 9:38 am
