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Alright, it's the first day of RevMo and I'm finally here for the reviews you requested. To be honest, I think this part as it is is pretty adequate, but ...

Hey there! I figured I'd drop by for a quick review today. So, the first few paragraphs really read like a back-of-the-cover blurb, and to be quite honest it's a ...

I'm here for the review you requested! I'm sorry it took a little bit longer than normal. This is a sweet, intimate story and for that I like it a ...

I'm loving how so much of this is different but I can still tell how it's related to the first draft. Trust me, the plot is so much easier to ...

Back again! Nooo, they're gone already. ;-; I think this was a much better way to show the destruction of the Shadow Talons than last time - it feels more ...

Hey felistia! I can't tell you how excited I was to see you had posted this. I missed reading it when you stopped posting the first draft. This is already ...

I like Ilami's attitude. She's determined to make this work, even if she was never really enthusiastic about coming here in the first place. I can't wait to see how ...

Alright, I'll combine my reviews on this part and the previous into one since there's no way I can find enough to say otherwise. Did I mention this is really ...

Okay, this will be a short but hopefully sweet review.

Hello! I've finally gotten around to reading this. I don't have too much to say, as I agree with a lot of what the other reviewers said, but I thought ...

I love how great of a friend Cherry is here. I will say that her dialogue here makes her feel more like the old happy Cherry rather than sad Cherry, ...

Okay, the first part was beautiful. I could see it, like a movie scene playing in my head. My only nitpick from that part is that I feel like his ...

Back again, of course! “I don’t know, sad. Down. Gloomy. Whatever you want to call it. I spend so much time doing and then I just get tired.” This makes ...

Okay, okay okay. So I feel bad seeing these chapters sit in the Green Room, so I'm going to jump in right here and start reviewing because I need more ...

Ah, I like it, Logan's angry at Julia! She kind of goes through that emotion fast though, considering that this chapter is the first hint we get of her being ...