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Back again! I'm surprised there's such a big hubbub around the car, though I guess if it's a smallish town, then given the circumstances it maybe makes more sense. To ...

Alright, it's the first day of RevMo and I'm finally here for the reviews you requested. To be honest, I think this part as it is is pretty adequate, but ...

Hey there! I figured I'd drop by for a quick review today. So, the first few paragraphs really read like a back-of-the-cover blurb, and to be quite honest it's a ...

I'm here for the review you requested! I'm sorry it took a little bit longer than normal. This is a sweet, intimate story and for that I like it a ...

I'm loving how so much of this is different but I can still tell how it's related to the first draft. Trust me, the plot is so much easier to ...

Back again! Nooo, they're gone already. ;-; I think this was a much better way to show the destruction of the Shadow Talons than last time - it feels more ...

Hey felistia! I can't tell you how excited I was to see you had posted this. I missed reading it when you stopped posting the first draft. This is already ...

I like Ilami's attitude. She's determined to make this work, even if she was never really enthusiastic about coming here in the first place. I can't wait to see how ...

Alright, I'll combine my reviews on this part and the previous into one since there's no way I can find enough to say otherwise. Did I mention this is really ...

Okay, this will be a short but hopefully sweet review.

Hello! I've finally gotten around to reading this. I don't have too much to say, as I agree with a lot of what the other reviewers said, but I thought ...

I love how great of a friend Cherry is here. I will say that her dialogue here makes her feel more like the old happy Cherry rather than sad Cherry, ...

Okay, the first part was beautiful. I could see it, like a movie scene playing in my head. My only nitpick from that part is that I feel like his ...

Back again, of course! “I don’t know, sad. Down. Gloomy. Whatever you want to call it. I spend so much time doing and then I just get tired.” This makes ...

Okay, okay okay. So I feel bad seeing these chapters sit in the Green Room, so I'm going to jump in right here and start reviewing because I need more ...