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Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. I really like the tone you've taken with this - it feels very intimate and full of wonder. ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. This honestly feels more like a first chapter than a prologue. You do a good job of establishing ...

Hey there! I saw this was a Warriors fanfiction, and so of course I couldn't resist even though it's been years since I read the series. I like that you ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a review today. I've read both parts of this story, so I'm able to comment on it as a whole. :D I ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. The first thing I really liked about this was your character's voices - they're quite strong right off ...

Hey Light! It's kind of weird to have a flashback like this, so I'm guessing that you're planning to put this where it belongs chronologically for the second draft, and ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Honestly, this is a pretty solid short story. It's perhaps not particularly deep, but it makes its point ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. I like that you dive right in with conflict - we already know what some of Wendolyn's problems ...

Hey there - thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. First thought - this is a good story and I was surprised people haven't noticed it really. Something ...

Hey Kira! I thought I'd drop by and review this today. I like your philosophical opening and the introduction of the Kings by this unknown narrator, particularly how he/she is ...

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Hey Silver! Just dropping by for a quick review today. I like how Eremia is paying enough attention to let the reader draw conclusions about all the political stuff, even ...

Okay, wow . I love every part of this. I was thinking that the pacing was way to fast, but then I remembered this was a short story, and for ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. In terms of story and character, this is an extremely strong and engaging chapter. Your characters and their ...

And I'm back again. :D This was a solid part overall. We learn valuable information and the characters continue to come through strong and clear in their actions. Felaris and ...