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Re: Chapter 2
Hey shan! I'm a little late on this one, but I am finally here! I wasn't expecting to get a chapter from Patsy's view! But I like it, and it'll ...
Jul 24, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 2.2
Wow. (This is basically my reaction to the whole story so far, let's be honest.) Okay, so my first thought is that I love the juxtaposition between the description of ...
Jul 24, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 19.2: Gael
Hey Light! Back as always for another review, and I have to say, this chapter was both anticlimactic and still really enjoyable. I'd expected something with a little more excitement ...
Jul 24, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 2.1
Hey Dark! Finally back to review this, but I'm not sure I have much to say! This is a really good chapter - the tension is building and I'm getting ...
Jul 21, 2018 -
Re: Achromatic- Chapter Three
Finally here for this review! Okay, I love the last line, though logically I'm not sure exactly what she's googling and I can't imagine it would be much help, other ...
Jul 21, 2018 -
Re: Early Sunset - Chapter 1
Hey there, Silence! I saw this sitting in the Green Room and thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. :D Right away, I also liked that you started ...
Jul 16, 2018 -
Re: Hero for Hire: Chapter 2
...Dang. That was... wow. Okay, so all of this is super good. I can just feel Eli's frustration with his job and I love how right away we're propelled straight ...
Jul 16, 2018 -
Re: Achromatic- Chapter Two
Alright, I'm back to review this chapter! I know it's a little late at night, but I said today and it's still today lol. xD I'll be honest, I was ...
Jul 15, 2018 -
Re: Achromatic- Chapter One
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today, and I have to say I really like your username! Overall, I quite liked this first chapter as ...
Jul 14, 2018 -
Re: Satirical Desposition
Hey there, aelihe! I thought I'd drop by and give this a quick review today. It was pretty interesting and well-written, and it made me think, so I figured it ...
Jul 13, 2018 -
Re: Why I disappeared from all social media permanently.
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this interesting essay tonight. Although I've never spent much of my time on traditional social media, I've spent far, far too ...
Jul 12, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 1.2
Hey Pan! Back again to review this next chapter. :D What to say? This flowed smoothly pretty much the whole way through, dropped some excellent hints about Hildegarde's future and ...
Jul 12, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey shaniac! I read your prologue but didn't review it, because I felt I didn't really have anything to add to the others' excellent reviews. But now I've gotten here ...
Jul 11, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 19.1: Gael
Hey Light! Back as always for another review. First thing, to address your author's note: I quite like your use of multiple scenes in this chapter. This style of smoothly ...
Jul 11, 2018 -
Re: Hero for Hire: Chapter 1
Hey Sonder! I'm glad this is out already, and super excited to review it for you today! So first off, this is awesome and I love it already! (As I've ...
Jul 4, 2018
