MeAndMyThoughts

Yes. There is a pun in 'lies'. Sorry, I am not romantic. I don't write romantic poems.

Thanks so much!!!!!

Actually, there is a pun in 'lies'. Only few have got it right though.

Thanks.

Thanks. But actually I wanted to convey that victory doesn't matter every time, and that we should not get demotivated if we don't win.

Thanks for telling about 'it's'. I didn't do it because then those lines will get short and also those two lines don't have any rhythm. I know it is an ...

Well. I have a recently composed short piece of work which I will post after the review day is over. I hope it will clear some of your doubts about ...

Why have you capitalized 'H' in 'Hard' rather than in 'hearts'?

Yeah, you are so right. Welcome. It is a very good poem.

I believe that your rhythm are song-like, but I use different rhythms in the same poem. The commas and semi-colans are for that only. Not full stops, but commas matter ...

Thanks for the suggestion of comma in the first line. I had it in mind but thought it might be grammatically wrong. In the second line though, I have omitted ...

The title and content are oxymoron. People write a lot about life, but I want to tell that it's something too complex to understand. But I have done it through ...

Thanks for the review. I purposely removed 'an' actually. 'For' is used as 'because' here.

Welcome. I hope to read more of your works.

Oh! I am sorry to hear that. Though I believe 'inferior' might be better than 'lesser'. And the other line has a very good meaning. Great!!!!!