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Mazzi

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Imagination

    So, I'll review Scar, I can't say it'll be good though. First off. BRILLIANT! ABSOLUTLEY BRILLIANT! This is one of the first lyric songs I could actually sing in my ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Inspiration...

    Hey Jennya! I'm here to review your work on this Happy Review Day! You certainly didn't have writers block when you typed this work up! Many people have tried to ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Edge of Appearance

    Hey, I'm reviewing your work today. Happy Review Day! I have to admit, your question is abit too strange for me. It seems very down to the point with that ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Burial on Sale

    Ok, on with this review... I noticed you have a very advanced vocabulary and I enjoyed reading it and recognizing the familiar shops/cafes. (I do live in England so I ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dream

    A good poem, very sad, but good. I really enjoyed it and I thank you for giving me the great experience of reading this poem. Passing between years That special ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Wine On-Line

    Huh? I didn't understand it, well not that well, anyway. The wine paragraph and then the social networks seemed, very cliched. So, I would only give it a three out-of ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stories From Malaysia: The Penglipur Lara

    Wow, impressive. Very, very impressive. I can't say nothing lower than impressive. I couldn't even find a mistake in that peice. It was, it was...impressive. So congratulations, you have made ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Feelings I can't Ignore

    God, I can't ignore this with the experiences I've been through >.< Anyway...back to the poem. It was good, it got be quite emotional, because I do that all the ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Birthday Card

    It was actually a very entertaining story for just finding a birthday card. I was also surprised with the detail you put in. (I'm referring to the purple painted finger ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Time

    Time allows us to perceive. Time allows us to unweave, the mysteries which it conceals, and the opportunities it reveals. Very impressive start. It also rhymes which helps me remember ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Angel 3

    I really enjoyed that. When I read the title I was expecting it to do with something godly, or atleast religously. But then with the spies and how she kicked ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Red-Wood Shelf (For 3 Pronged Contest.)

    The small car moved slowly, making t i re tracks in the snow. - I don't know if you spell it differently somewhere else but we spell it with an ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: "I Love You," You Said

    This reminded me of a relationship I had with a girl a few months ago. Well, we didn't really go out. But we really liked eachother, we were going to ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Spider Web

    I'm going to be honest. I didn't like the second paragraph. I liked the first paragraph but the second (and last) just seemed slightly odd and away from the poem. ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Drowning

    I am silent after reading that. I feel....I don't know how I feel. But it was good. Very good. Excellent. I could even go on to say; Exquisite. It reminded ...

    Dec 30, 2010


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