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Re: Imagination
So, I'll review Scar, I can't say it'll be good though. First off. BRILLIANT! ABSOLUTLEY BRILLIANT! This is one of the first lyric songs I could actually sing in my ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Inspiration...
Hey Jennya! I'm here to review your work on this Happy Review Day! You certainly didn't have writers block when you typed this work up! Many people have tried to ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Edge of Appearance
Hey, I'm reviewing your work today. Happy Review Day! I have to admit, your question is abit too strange for me. It seems very down to the point with that ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Burial on Sale
Ok, on with this review... I noticed you have a very advanced vocabulary and I enjoyed reading it and recognizing the familiar shops/cafes. (I do live in England so I ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Dream
A good poem, very sad, but good. I really enjoyed it and I thank you for giving me the great experience of reading this poem. Passing between years That special ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Wine On-Line
Huh? I didn't understand it, well not that well, anyway. The wine paragraph and then the social networks seemed, very cliched. So, I would only give it a three out-of ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Stories From Malaysia: The Penglipur Lara
Wow, impressive. Very, very impressive. I can't say nothing lower than impressive. I couldn't even find a mistake in that peice. It was, it was...impressive. So congratulations, you have made ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Feelings I can't Ignore
God, I can't ignore this with the experiences I've been through >.< Anyway...back to the poem. It was good, it got be quite emotional, because I do that all the ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: The Birthday Card
It was actually a very entertaining story for just finding a birthday card. I was also surprised with the detail you put in. (I'm referring to the purple painted finger ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Time
Time allows us to perceive. Time allows us to unweave, the mysteries which it conceals, and the opportunities it reveals. Very impressive start. It also rhymes which helps me remember ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Angel 3
I really enjoyed that. When I read the title I was expecting it to do with something godly, or atleast religously. But then with the spies and how she kicked ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: The Red-Wood Shelf (For 3 Pronged Contest.)
The small car moved slowly, making t i re tracks in the snow. - I don't know if you spell it differently somewhere else but we spell it with an ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: "I Love You," You Said
This reminded me of a relationship I had with a girl a few months ago. Well, we didn't really go out. But we really liked eachother, we were going to ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Spider Web
I'm going to be honest. I didn't like the second paragraph. I liked the first paragraph but the second (and last) just seemed slightly odd and away from the poem. ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Drowning
I am silent after reading that. I feel....I don't know how I feel. But it was good. Very good. Excellent. I could even go on to say; Exquisite. It reminded ...
Dec 30, 2010
