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Re: [To a Main Character]
Hey, Liminality! Here's a short review for you today! People crush sunflowers too large to fit in a jean pocket. Nice imagery in this opening! It's no hidden subtext, I ...
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: SHE
Hey, Nightk! Here's a review for you today! I’m in a battle and i need to win, i have to win, my inner me doesn't want to lose but a ...
Jun 28, 2021 -
Re: Maybe
Hey, Phillauthet! Here's a review for you today! Then why can't we hear them? Maybe we've just Shut our Ears. But why can't we understand them? Maybe we've just Stopped ...
Jun 26, 2021 -
Re: The Colour Red
Hey, AlmostImmortal! Here's a review for you today and welcome to YWS! Red is the colour who cannot decide It fights for love, longs for hate I love the personification ...
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: first love (part one)
Hey, Froggy! Here's a review for you today! This is a little different because I decided to give you a full edit. I like the direction that this story is ...
Jun 24, 2021 -
Re: Trace Finds Help
Hey, ArctiWolf! Here's a review for you today! Trace, a now-retired fire ant major, was making good time. Though it made him sad that all the locals were afraid of ...
Jun 23, 2021 -
Re: Peachy's Adventures Chapter 1
Hey, Victoria! Here's a review for you today! I thought this was a pretty funny concept for a story about two birds in a pet store. I love how Kirbie ...
Jun 21, 2021 -
Re: Winter
Hi, Mingan! Here's a short review for you today! When the air starts to bite, And my feet get a chill, I know it’s that time of year, My soul ...
Jun 20, 2021 -
Re: Behind The Window
Hey, Wordzyy! Here's a short review for you today! She dwells all night long gaining the ground of my breath. Toiling slowly with (the) shovel she brings with her(.) I ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: When the Wind Blows 1.2
Hey, Victoria! Here's a review for you today! I thought that these first two parts to chapter one were very well written and I'm loving the story so far! This ...
Jun 18, 2021 -
Re: potato shirt
Hi, apple the writer! Here's a short review for you today! Potato got in his potato car and raced over there, but it was crowded. Aw, don't you hate it ...
Jun 17, 2021 -
Re: it feels like we only go backwards
Hi, chikara! Here's a short review for you today! you said you'd choke me if I didn't try and you said you'd watch as every soul leaves my body. I ...
Jun 16, 2021 -
Re: Floodgates with missing keys
Hi, Liminality! Here's a short review for you today! my mother shouts me out the numbers The wording of this line felt a little strange to me. What if you ...
Jun 15, 2021 -
Re: nature is art
Hi illy7896! Here's a short review for you today! the spider’s web that crawls is never honest. Ants climb their mountains- a treacherous journey, I really liked the imagery of ...
Jun 14, 2021 -
Re: Midnight ponderings
Hi, NivedaJames22! Here's a short review for you today! Gentle murmurs Of soft slumber, Whispered words Of the half-asleep. Turbulent changes Like a chaotic sea, Between dream to dream, With ...
Jun 12, 2021