MattLangg

Thank you! Yes, I repeated it because this is in fact a song I've written. haha

Thank you very much! I just edited it a whole lot - adding a lot more imagery. Thanks again!

Everyone has different outlooks, different experiences, and different personalities. Maybe you do know what I feel - maybe you don't. That's not the point. The point is to feel what ...

When I get inspired, it's usually from something I want to do very badly. Inspiration for this.... Taking a spring walk with the one I love.

Disregard the other comments, I know what you're trying to say. It all makes sense now, and you know what else makes sense? You and I; we make sense. I ...

But it's bloodshed - the taking away of life. The taking away of life is a sin. But it's worth it if it's my own life.

It's a letter to myself.

This poem made me laugh! It definitely does have a prominent moral, "Don't cheat!" or maybe.. "What goes around comes around!"

I thought this was pretty interesting, but I feel as though you could definitely add a lot more. Maybe help explain why she has the names she's been given, for ...

Love, this is my favorite of anything you've ever written. It's spectacular in every way. I Love it

I actually just wrote this in Christology class out of boredom haha I think I have lost all interest in this, and I'm going to replace it.

Don't change anything. Ever

I simply did it because the reviewer before you asked me to.

Well, this one has a lot of meaning to it... I'll explain it stanza by stanza. Untangling the strings of a mangled past. Opening new doors as we look through ...

Thanks guys! ^^