MattJF

Thank you everyone who took the time to comment or review my poem. To answer fiction903's question. It means that people can tell you beautiful things but they could mean ...

David Bowie and Prince, (who are two of my ultimate idols) wrote about fashion and so I thought it was about time I picked up my pen and did the ...

Hi Percy Your poem is awesome. The reason I say this is because your making a statement, and I believe in what your saying.Other than the line repetition at the ...

thanks for the tips! :D

Comments on board and thanks for the tip. But this is not a love poem its an anti-love poem for the cynical minded.

Good use of vocabulary and you've obviously taken time on it. But I have to agree with Velvet whispers and sae, I have not got a clue what this is ...

Grave is a poem ultimately about death and liberation through rebirth, and how someone you love can make you feel "dead" is also about the feeling of suffocation in a ...

Thankyou for the tips, I will pm you if I need anymore help. I do not want it to sound vampire because I was trying to convey the situation in ...

Wow a beautiful poem . The concept was brilliant but the last stanza was your weakest. Overall a good job

Thanks , Ill try and work on the grammar. :)

A sad poem but very nice. Structured well with great vocabulary , your very good! kind of poem that sticks on your mind. :D

A good poem. Made me laugh. I thought it had good structure and it was very sweet.A bit odd, what made you write about a cockroach?

Thankyou.Its much appreciated

Thought it was a great poem, very narcisistic but in an empowering kind of way. Love the way she rejects him but very superficial aswell. Overall a great poem , ...

Hi! Thanks for your review, im going to try and review yours. I think whats great about the poem is its simplicity . its short and sweet and gets the ...