MattJF

The title immediately caught my eye. I can't wait for the new Tim Burton movie. I liked your poem but the rhyming was really off. I would go over that. ...

I for one would like to say I thought your poem was great. To tackle such an issue is brave and you seem to have succeeded here. Although I would ...

Hi. Just wanted to say I loved your poem. I haven't got time to review it fully but I just wanted to say that it reminded of one of my ...

I agree with the others, in that this could be a song. If your not a musician I would find a friend who is and maybe work with them. I ...

I have to say I didn't like this poem. I like the story. It is just that you have chosen to tell it in a shabby way. You haven't taken ...

An interesting subject to cover. The selfishness of human nature and also the need for comfort and love. These are tough subjects which I think you have tackled fairly well. ...

I love Haiku's but I can never write them. You clearly can. I loved every single word. The vision was fantastic. In Haiku's you have to use every word to ...

Hi Conrad. Your poem was actually really good. I love your language and the way you used it to execute your vision. I do agree with Rosey when she said ...

Your poem is awesome. You share my passion for music. I could relate to every line. Sometimes music is the only escape. Its like a refuge you captured perfectly in ...

Hi Strangegirl I love haiku's, and your poem reminded me why. You created a beautiful picture using such a simple method of writing. I imagined the snow falling in my ...

Hi fiction903 I thought that your poem was really good. The imagry was great and so was the language and fluidity. Very few writers have good fluidity when writing poems. ...

Hi StoicTraveler Your poemwas very inspiring. It makes you think about the bigger questions and also makes the reader answer questions about yourself. I think that you are a very ...

Wow. What an emotional poem. It really engages the reader and you really tackled the subject well. Sorry if this is written from personal experience. It is very powerful and ...

I loved your poem but my favourite line was this: "Darkened clouds, wind and rain.Left alone with all this pain. It’s winter here without you". I loved how you compared ...

I thought that your poem was amazing probably the best one I have read so far on this forum tonight. It was so sad and I agree with Moriah Leila ...