Published February 7, 2010
Gather yourself and head towards the unknown
Bear no fear or anxiousness at why lies ahead
The answer is within
Rest your mind and find serenity in the chaos
Hold no worry to what great mysteries remain unsolved
The answer is within
Collect your emotions and live in harmony with uncertainty
Seek nothing in what was always never to be understood
The answer is within
The answers to the past...
to the present...
to the future...
Always within
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Hi StoicTraveler
Your poemwas very inspiring. It makes you think about the bigger questions and also makes the reader answer questions about yourself. I think that you are a very talented poet and I look forward to reading more of your work. If you have any questions please PM me and I will be happy to help. Your poetry reminded me of a favourite poet of mine called Rainer Maria Rilke. I think you would enjoy his work.
Fantastic! That actually inspired me to work harder and never give up.
This so far is one of my favorite poems.