MattJF

This poem is probably one of the best poems I think I have ever seen on this site. The sexuality of this is so powerful. I think I understand that ...

I love the poem. I completely relate to it. Someone who I was going out with broke up with me and never told me why. Just completely blanked me. I ...

To be honest I was not expecting this. Your speaking from the heart. Which I can feel. I'm assuming that you are the girl in this poem and Chris is ...

Hand me a bucket! I'm sorry but if you want to progress as a writer, then you have to get rid of this shit. I read it and I could ...

Hi Conrad. Loved your poem. Like a fairytale but very dark and edgy. You don't try to cover it up with happiness, just showing it in the original form. I ...

Loved it. I admire and tip my hat to you. For standing up for what is right and for posting this. I am not gay either but I oppose all ...

I don't think it matters what "Alice" this is based on. I think your trying to sort of giving Alice a reality check. Life isn't all fairy tales and tea ...

I loved this poem. I related to it completely. Ha ha even down to the eye colour! I look forward to seeing more of your poetry. I thought it was ...

I've decided to venture into lyrics to see what all the fuss is about. I loved this. I write lyric poetry and I'm trying to turn my work into songs, ...

I really liked this poem and I agree with Story weaver in that you have obviously put a lot of thought into writing this. All in all not a bad ...

I hate to sound horrible, but I just was not into this poem. If you can call it that. It was too hard to follow and although I liked your ...

I think they are all pretty brilliant. My favorite is 2,7 and 9. I can't pick out of them. My only advice to you is to randomly pick a number ...

Ooh, I liked this. Very haunting and it stuck in my mind. I agree with the previous comment in that it sounds like something an old wizard would say. It ...

I loved it. The fast face of it. The flow was great. Perfectly describing teenage lust. Your obviously very talented. What inspired you to write this poem. It immediately caught ...

The perfect word to describe this was enchanting. It really was. You drew me in and the language was beautiful. I read it twice! What inspired yo to write this? ...