Master_Yoda

Hello Dudette! Let's get straight to the review. I have to say that I think that your twist was sheer genius. I really like the entire story. Nervously, I glanced ...

Hi 84Moss, Welcome to YWS, I'm sure you'll have a most pleasant stay! You haven't really given us much to work with here. I don't know much about breakdancing, But ...

Wow, anti-pop! You've got another golden star for this piece for sure. ;) So my cousin and I went out on a trip To walk along the Cliffs of Insanity ...

Hi timeless, I expect this review to be short, and only because you've done such an astounding job that you need very little help with this piece. I don't really ...

I have to say Light_Devil, this was a seriously solid idea. I don't really have much time to review it now, but here are the thoughts that come immediately to ...

Hey there Mark, and welcome to YWS. I'm sure that you will find this community helpful and friendly. Plus the reviews here are better than they are anywhere on the ...

Wow Adnamarine you write extraordinarily. In fact I think I had to read this about five times before I had an "ink"ling of what was actually going on. And even ...

Hi anti-pop This is a really great piece. I really like the way that you've captured your characters. Even from this short piece, I already feel like I know them. ...

Hi Starlene I must say that I really like this. You write a fairly strong prose, and really know how to draw the reader's focus. Your piece has already been ...

Hi there Archer, While I'm not going to rave about how brilliant this was, I will indeed attempt to provide some tips that I hope will help you improve it. ...

Hi ConfusingSillyLittleGirl It's nice to know that I'm not the only South African here. I don't really think I've seen you around, but I'm pleased to make your acquaintance. You ...

Hi Armagan, Welcome to the Young Writers Society. Just to inform you that we do have a rule that before we post a piece of our own, we review two ...

I know what I'm picking up next time I get to a bookstore. I can't wait to read this. I can't believe you didn't like Speaker for the Dead etc. ...

BarrettBenedict, you write wonderfully! Your writing is both sophisticated as well as humorous. Your style is both unique and intriguing. I can only make a couple of suggestions, so here ...

Hi asxz As you plan on entering this into a competition, I am going to be really aggressive in my review. I am also, for the same reason, going to ...