Mary97

I loved this poem! It's incredibly realistic and simple, yet powerful. It depicts an uglier side of society and you described it beautifully. I loved the lines: "Ask me why ...

This was an interesting take on Beowulf, but it was good. I loved the last line: "He wondered if perhaps there was a bit of monster inside us all." It ...

Hello! With a little editing, this piece will be awesome :) I'm not sure if this is an issue of the formatting on my tablet or if this is in ...

This is a really interesting poem. I like the topic. It's creepy yet beautiful. I loved the lines: "It rages past the fires in California, It spread faster than the ...

This was a very sweet story :) I really liked it! I love the morals of friendship and kindness you used. The world could learn a lesson from these. There ...

Hello :) I enjoyed reading your piece. It was short, simple, and quite realistic. This is a fairly dark piece without being too dark. I like how you focused more ...

I love this! You really hooked the reader in, and I can't wait to read more! I think everybody below commented on what I was going to say. Just fix ...

Hello :) I enjoyed learning more about the characters. I found it surprising that Sara and Will had not been on a first date, but you sort of clarified the ...

You're doing a good job :) I like the humor in this story. I feel like I know a couple people who resemble Peter. It makes him even more real ...

Like I said, I'm not very good at poetry. I can certainly appreciate a good poem though, and I loved this one. I can't really say much about the rhythm ...

I loved this piece! Your style in this literally left me with my mouth agape. I loved the line, "What she don’t know is time be a sister, be a ...

Hello! I enjoyed this :) Nice work, once again. You did a nice job at describing in some detail without throwing too much at the reader. I really liked the ...

Hello! Interesting piece. I find it difficult to do historical fiction, and you seem to have done it with ease. Nice job :) I noticed a few errors, but nothing ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS :) I'm super new as well, but if my experience is anything to go by, I think you'll really enjoy it. In a couple of places, ...

You did a good job at describing the setting in this story. I have a very vivid image of what the the house looks like, which I definitely enjoy. So ...