MarianaChristena

This poem is simply beautiful. I'm a sucker for the quiet, nostalgic beauty that you captured so eloquently. Also, I'm a huge sucker for Greek Mythology, so I of course ...

Just kidding. That's not all. I really loved this poem. It has the nostalgic, slightly overwhelmed feeling that I definitely look for in poetry. I liked the ending. It kind ...

It took me a few re-reads, but here it is. I really liked this poem, though I do wish there was more of it. I feel like a little more ...

I simply adore this style of poetry. I typically like bittersweet/nostalgic pieces, but empowering is definitely a close second. There was one line that I had a slight problem with. ...

I absolutely love this style of poetry. I'm completely obsessed with bittersweet and nostalgic symbolism and this is perfect. I only have one critique. It's a bit hypocritical, because I ...

I love how dark this is. I am a huge fan of the lone statements, paired with the time tag. It's not a huge deal, but maybe you should put ...

I loved this, like a lot. There are a couple places where the phrasing is a little awkward, but nothing too big. "Yet at a young age she had that ...

This was a really great beginning. There were a few grammar mistakes that I noticed, such as sentence fragments and capitalization errors, but nothing too bad. I love how you ...

I liked the story. The plotline seemed a little rushed, but that was probably because it was supposed to fit within a certain length. I'm not sure about the title, ...

I don't have a problem with the length, but maybe that's just me. So far, I really like the story. The suspense developed through the first few paragraphs drew me ...

Okay, so this is my first review. I'm just going to start before I start rambling awkwardly. The beginning was great, I feel like it conveyed the fact that Benjamin ...