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  • Poetry » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Ashes to Ashes

    Spooktacular! This is Margo Seuss here for a wicked review on this fine Halloween Christmas. First of all I'd like to say that I love LOVE the phrase 'merry agony.' ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Halloween hospital

    Hi, wickedlygoodwriter. This is Margo Seuss here for a review. I love the idea of a Halloween hospital. Question: when a creature in the hospital dies, do they become a ...

    Oct 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Gelotophobia - Fear of being laughed at.

    Hello, Theawesomefrance. Margo here to review your work. I would categorize this work as horror! I like how you told this from the perspective of Henry. I think to improve ...

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Don't Mind Me

    Hello, PCA123. This is Margo Seuss here for a review. I like the idea behind this poem. So often we have to put on an 'act' for the public to ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Letter

    Hello, Lilith. Margo here for a review. Great idea! A romance between a goth girl and a troll. That's a new one for me! I bow my metaphorical topper to ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Cloudless Night

    Hello, Ishan. Welcome to YWS! Margo here for a review of your first YWS poem! Cloudless nights certainly are beautiful. There's nothing like the breathtaking site of a sky full ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: f

    Hello, Yastika. Margo here for a review. I can imagine someone reading this as a rap. Although your ryhme scheme is not constant, you still managed to acheive good flow ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Lets Fade Away for Our Pain

    Hello, Shaylin. Margo Seuss here for a review. This was beautifully and descriptively written. Fantastic use of literary devices. Your tone was all too clear and everything flowed perfectly together. ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Midnight Piano

    Hello, Amindor. Margo here for a review. Cats truly are an inspiration! They are our mews! Haha! I loved your description in this piece. A boy playing his soul out ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: The Clay Scene.

    Hey, Lemisa. Margo here for a review. This piece is different. I like different. I get that these are two teenagers. A girl and a guy who are seemingly friends ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Magic Survives: Chapter 2- Monsters in the dark

    Hello, GreenTulip. This MS here for a review. I like that you have started this novel off with a real exciting scene. Here we have a number of characters with ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Phoenix Inferno

    Hello, ThereseCricket. This MS and I'm here for a review on your sister's work. Pat your sister on the back. This is a cool idea. I'm all for the secret ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Mad World: Chapter One

    An enticing first chapter. I was left with just the right amount of questions. I'm not confused, I'm just curious. This is a good way to start. I want to ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: Cat Steps Chapter 1.2

    Why hello again! I'm beginning to like this princess Kerani. She's sort of a Mulan type gal. A powerful woman. Nice. My questions regarding her have now been answered. I ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: Cat Steps Chapter 1.1

    Hello, Rosey Unicorn. This is Margo here for a review. You have seduced the reader into this world of royalty and sensuality. This first piece is a perfect length and ...

    Jul 27, 2014


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