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Re: Ashes to Ashes
Spooktacular! This is Margo Seuss here for a wicked review on this fine Halloween Christmas. First of all I'd like to say that I love LOVE the phrase 'merry agony.' ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Halloween hospital
Hi, wickedlygoodwriter. This is Margo Seuss here for a review. I love the idea of a Halloween hospital. Question: when a creature in the hospital dies, do they become a ...
Oct 18, 2014 -
Re: Gelotophobia - Fear of being laughed at.
Hello, Theawesomefrance. Margo here to review your work. I would categorize this work as horror! I like how you told this from the perspective of Henry. I think to improve ...
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: Don't Mind Me
Hello, PCA123. This is Margo Seuss here for a review. I like the idea behind this poem. So often we have to put on an 'act' for the public to ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: The Letter
Hello, Lilith. Margo here for a review. Great idea! A romance between a goth girl and a troll. That's a new one for me! I bow my metaphorical topper to ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: A Cloudless Night
Hello, Ishan. Welcome to YWS! Margo here for a review of your first YWS poem! Cloudless nights certainly are beautiful. There's nothing like the breathtaking site of a sky full ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: f
Hello, Yastika. Margo here for a review. I can imagine someone reading this as a rap. Although your ryhme scheme is not constant, you still managed to acheive good flow ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Lets Fade Away for Our Pain
Hello, Shaylin. Margo Seuss here for a review. This was beautifully and descriptively written. Fantastic use of literary devices. Your tone was all too clear and everything flowed perfectly together. ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Midnight Piano
Hello, Amindor. Margo here for a review. Cats truly are an inspiration! They are our mews! Haha! I loved your description in this piece. A boy playing his soul out ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Clay Scene.
Hey, Lemisa. Margo here for a review. This piece is different. I like different. I get that these are two teenagers. A girl and a guy who are seemingly friends ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Magic Survives: Chapter 2- Monsters in the dark
Hello, GreenTulip. This MS here for a review. I like that you have started this novel off with a real exciting scene. Here we have a number of characters with ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno
Hello, ThereseCricket. This MS and I'm here for a review on your sister's work. Pat your sister on the back. This is a cool idea. I'm all for the secret ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Mad World: Chapter One
An enticing first chapter. I was left with just the right amount of questions. I'm not confused, I'm just curious. This is a good way to start. I want to ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Cat Steps Chapter 1.2
Why hello again! I'm beginning to like this princess Kerani. She's sort of a Mulan type gal. A powerful woman. Nice. My questions regarding her have now been answered. I ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Cat Steps Chapter 1.1
Hello, Rosey Unicorn. This is Margo here for a review. You have seduced the reader into this world of royalty and sensuality. This first piece is a perfect length and ...
Jul 27, 2014
