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Mardehoward

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 3.1

    Hey! I'm back! I don't think I have any critiques besides that it has a few typos which can be easily spot when you read a once-over and that I'm ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 2.2

    Back here for yet, another review! Very interesting chapter and I enjoyed it fully. I'm really into all of this. I loved the group of friends and how they are ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 2.1

    Heyooo! This story keeps getting better! I really liked how you gave us this other person's point of view and described the way Kyle looked just so nicely making us ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 1 (Rewrite)

    Heyo! Marde here again! I wondered after reading 'shadow hunter' if this was a fan fiction of Mortal Instruments? :) Can I say that this chapter was epic? Cause it ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 1

    Hello there! I'm Marde and I'm here to review your job! I read there's a rewrite but I don't know if this is also important so I will start here. ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: This Business of Love (Chapter 3: The Clown Prince of Crime)

    Hello!!! Back! Missed me? XD Okay, again...amazing choice of words, descriptions and details. A very legit job you do in that. I really love the job you did describing Stanley's ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: This Business of Love (Chapter 2: Ipkiss and Batz)

    Hello! I'm back! So I've read through this whole thing and I have a few comments! I loved the flow and rhythm of this chapter! I could read it so ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: This Business of Love (Chapter 1: The Unexpected Visitor)

    Hello there! It's Marde here! I notice how this is a fanfic of "The mask". I haven't seen that movie in ages so I don't remember most of it, but ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Glue

    Hello there! Marde here to make a review (which, by the way, happy review day!)! To start off, I love this piece. I love how you managed to transmit so ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Found The Answer

    Heyo there, friend! Let me start by saying that I enjoyed reading this piece. Very efficient representation of one of youth's common problem. Although a lot of people other than ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Rumors

    Wow! All my respects! You are truly amazing! Hi, Opora! XD Here to make a review on this awesome poem! Ok, well you make this poem sound so good! You ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: It's her.

    Hi, Griffin! This poem is indeed romantic. This is soooo cute! OK. First of all I have to say that the poem is written in a very good way and ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: The Death Of Zeus

    Hi, there! Well, I have to disagree with what @Griffinkeeper said about the title of the story. Actually, the title of the story called my attention. I have to admit ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: This, My Excavation

    Hi there! I'm Marde here to make a review on this very review day! First off, this poem was slightly interesting, but from my point of view... very difficult and ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Pack - Chapter Two - Kaat

    Hi! It's Marde here to make your review! First I wanted to say that this story is awesome! Now, lets do what I came here for. "From the corner of ...

    Sep 29, 2013


Perhaps it is better to wake up after all, even to suffer, rather than to remain a dupe to illusions all one's life.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening