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Re: Visions
Okay this was actually interesting. It kinda feels like someone trying to explain a dream but stopping halfway because they know words won't do it justice. I liked that vibe. ...
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Re: To my Daughter
Hi Cactuslily, So, this poem honestly felt really soft but also heavy at the same time. Like you're reading about a newborn, but underneath that, there's this fear of the ...
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Re: The Sun Always Finds A Way In
Nah because THIS feels like the kind of poem you read twice and then just sit there staring at the ceiling for a minute đ The imagery here is actually ...
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Re: Tesseract
This feels like one of those poems that doesnât fully explain itself but still hits somehow. Like you read it and your brain just goes âwait⌠hold onâ đ The ...
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Re: Winter Crush
Hello there, Alex! Mangled Soul here with a review.This poem honestly feels like one of those moments you never planned for but it just⌠happens. Like you see someone once, ...
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Re: A flower's musings
This poem honestly hurts in a quiet way. Like it doesnât scream pain, it just sits there and makes your chest feel heavy. The whole tomato flower thing? Sounds simple ...
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Re: sheep in wolf's clothing
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Dec 20, 2025
This piece is layered, unsettling, and quietly devastating, using allegory to explore how trauma, perception, and silence can distort identity. Framing the setting as a ranch is an effective choice; ... -
Re: I Love the Way God Made Me
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Dec 20, 2025
This poem feels like a quiet conversation the speaker is finally brave enough to have with themselves. What begins as a list of perceived flaws slowly transforms into acceptance, and ... -
Re: soap\\cilantro
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Dec 20, 2025
This poem is striking in its restraint, relying almost entirely on juxtaposition to carry meaning. The paired words create a rhythm that feels deliberate and meditative, inviting the reader to ... -
Re: Basking in My Own Blood
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Dec 20, 2025
This poem is deeply unsettling in a way that feels intentional, and that discomfort is central to its impact. It begins quietly, almost gently, with repetition and simplicity that mirror ... -
Re: You don't know me
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Dec 20, 2025
This poem reads like a direct confrontation, and that honesty is what gives it its strength. It doesnât hide behind complex metaphors or decorative language; instead, it speaks plainly, almost ...
